for Smile5/23/2014 c15 nemesisswan
The story itself has couple parts that this story could happily miss and here you are ruining it completely because of some idiotic, vegetarian rubbish. Didn't know you were one of these people. The mere idea is ridiculous. I'm happily dropping this story. Finally. Because I was curious and wasted more and more time on it. I'm glad I still skipped half chapters.
I know I must sound unbearably rude here but that's what happens when I am faced with a mud-level story. Well, maybe not mud. You actually had some talent. Above the mud-level but still heavily on the ground.
The story itself has couple parts that this story could happily miss and here you are ruining it completely because of some idiotic, vegetarian rubbish. Didn't know you were one of these people. The mere idea is ridiculous. I'm happily dropping this story. Finally. Because I was curious and wasted more and more time on it. I'm glad I still skipped half chapters.
I know I must sound unbearably rude here but that's what happens when I am faced with a mud-level story. Well, maybe not mud. You actually had some talent. Above the mud-level but still heavily on the ground.
5/22/2014 c5 nemesisswan
Good writing style but you're just another writer who added many useless things just for the joy of it.
Good writing style but you're just another writer who added many useless things just for the joy of it.
12/8/2013 c17 Stinker126
Awww I'm sad to see it end :( this should have way more reviews too. But it was a great and cute fanfic you made ;D
Awww I'm sad to see it end :( this should have way more reviews too. But it was a great and cute fanfic you made ;D
12/8/2013 c17 
1Aleena23
aww this was so great, i loved the wedding description, it was truly beautiful! Well done! you know a story about Beth would be amazing, i think she would make a great imprint- maybe she even knows jasper or alice :D x
1Aleena23aww this was so great, i loved the wedding description, it was truly beautiful! Well done! you know a story about Beth would be amazing, i think she would make a great imprint- maybe she even knows jasper or alice :D x
11/30/2013 c10 Guest
Her power is gonna be a cheese ball moment and make others care for her and want to protect her so she can bind them to her will isn't it? lol Bril chappie love :) 3 xx
Her power is gonna be a cheese ball moment and make others care for her and want to protect her so she can bind them to her will isn't it? lol Bril chappie love :) 3 xx
11/7/2013 c16 Stinker126
Awwwww XD you're making ME feel all heart fluttery
Awwwww XD you're making ME feel all heart fluttery
11/6/2013 c16 Aleena23
I GOT A MENTION ahhh so happy ahhaa, aww that was adorble and WOAH noel oh my goodness what a gift! Those children of the moon though were pretty scary i thought,lol well anyway superb job :D xx
I GOT A MENTION ahhh so happy ahhaa, aww that was adorble and WOAH noel oh my goodness what a gift! Those children of the moon though were pretty scary i thought,lol well anyway superb job :D xx
10/26/2013 c15 1Aleena23
ohh no, dont end it ! this was superb, besides i like the cheese, its adorable lol, well done, i wonder if noel is talented, please say yes! xx
1Aleena23ohh no, dont end it ! this was superb, besides i like the cheese, its adorable lol, well done, i wonder if noel is talented, please say yes! xx
10/25/2013 c15 Guest
I don't think Noel's cheesy :) Such a cute moment of her first hunt
I don't think Noel's cheesy :) Such a cute moment of her first hunt
10/20/2013 c14 aaaaaiiii
I am in loooooooooveeee! This cannot be the end! Come on! Fuuuu you if it is! DO MORE!
I am in loooooooooveeee! This cannot be the end! Come on! Fuuuu you if it is! DO MORE!