for All Mixed Up 29/11/2017 c16 
5NarikotheShadow
After so long I have finally finished the series. I am truly grateful for this story. There's not a lot of Aladdin and Ariel fan fics out there, however this goes in the top thread of the ones I have read! Thank you again for finishing this story and I hope to read more from you! :)
5NarikotheShadowAfter so long I have finally finished the series. I am truly grateful for this story. There's not a lot of Aladdin and Ariel fan fics out there, however this goes in the top thread of the ones I have read! Thank you again for finishing this story and I hope to read more from you! :)
6/13/2017 c16 ButterflysAreScary
That was such a creative story! You have a gift and an incredible imagination. The fact that you can translate that into a story that comes full circle... I LOVED It!
I hope you DO decide to continue writing. I really feel like your stories could make an interesting movie. I loved all your references to movies, and loved how... well keeping the characters true to their original story lines and personalities, you were able to give them more depth and layers that maybe we didn't see in their original movies. Thank you for a truly amazing adventure. Even though you say you have grown up, there is something here that you should pursue at some point in your life. I think you could really be on the right track here, for the next disney Great story!
That was such a creative story! You have a gift and an incredible imagination. The fact that you can translate that into a story that comes full circle... I LOVED It!
I hope you DO decide to continue writing. I really feel like your stories could make an interesting movie. I loved all your references to movies, and loved how... well keeping the characters true to their original story lines and personalities, you were able to give them more depth and layers that maybe we didn't see in their original movies. Thank you for a truly amazing adventure. Even though you say you have grown up, there is something here that you should pursue at some point in your life. I think you could really be on the right track here, for the next disney Great story!
6/13/2017 c9 ButterflysAreScary
i'm really excited to see where the story goes next. You really are great at suspense and twists.
i'm really excited to see where the story goes next. You really are great at suspense and twists.
6/13/2017 c8 ButterflysAreScary
Talk about an interesting twist?! I assumed he would chose Ariel, of course. Oh My Gawd!
Poor ariel.
Talk about an interesting twist?! I assumed he would chose Ariel, of course. Oh My Gawd!
Poor ariel.
1/24/2015 c14 NarikotheShadow
Hurray for updates! It's been a long time since I've been on FF. But I'm so glad you have' abandoned this story! sadly my computer is still broken, so my best friend posts things for me. I write them on my phone and she edits them and posts it! Anywho, I love the little scene between them! Aladdin and Ariel FTW! Oh and I bet it was Gisselle, she's the one that sent it! :)
Hurray for updates! It's been a long time since I've been on FF. But I'm so glad you have' abandoned this story! sadly my computer is still broken, so my best friend posts things for me. I write them on my phone and she edits them and posts it! Anywho, I love the little scene between them! Aladdin and Ariel FTW! Oh and I bet it was Gisselle, she's the one that sent it! :)
6/29/2014 c13 NarikotheShadow
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This is in your update maybe it's my phone or maybe it's something else but I got that above.
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This is in your update maybe it's my phone or maybe it's something else but I got that above.
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4/7/2014 c12 NarikotheShadow
I love the movie Enchanted! It was awesome! And I can't wait for the next update! Also yeah the songs! Please oh please use the song 'how does she know you love her' :D I 3 that song! And I heart your series! :D keep up the great work!
Nariko
I love the movie Enchanted! It was awesome! And I can't wait for the next update! Also yeah the songs! Please oh please use the song 'how does she know you love her' :D I 3 that song! And I heart your series! :D keep up the great work!
Nariko
3/3/2014 c11 NarikotheShadow
Oh my goodness! How awesome was that! I definitely did not see the great Peter Pan getting captured and Aladdin getting sent to New York! Also oh my goodness! Is Al gonna find his New York City girl? :O and dumb Jasmine for hurting poor Aladdin! :P either way I'm glad Pariel is I'm this! As well as Alariel? Araddin? You know what I mean xD Ariel and Aladdin, so anyways will there be a love triangle? You know it! Can't wait for the next update! Please update soon! :D
Oh my goodness! How awesome was that! I definitely did not see the great Peter Pan getting captured and Aladdin getting sent to New York! Also oh my goodness! Is Al gonna find his New York City girl? :O and dumb Jasmine for hurting poor Aladdin! :P either way I'm glad Pariel is I'm this! As well as Alariel? Araddin? You know what I mean xD Ariel and Aladdin, so anyways will there be a love triangle? You know it! Can't wait for the next update! Please update soon! :D
1/23/2014 c10 NarikotheShadow
Really?! Ahhhhhhhh! Can't wait! You are totally awesome! (3rd and 4th stories here we come!) Also can't wait for the love triangle! Unless you just want Jasmine and Aladdin together? That will be fine as long as Peter and Ariel stay together! :D haha look at me suggesting shtuff. I really really like this story! And the whole idea of it! :D please please never stop updating! (Like me :3 I'm soo lazy :3)
Really?! Ahhhhhhhh! Can't wait! You are totally awesome! (3rd and 4th stories here we come!) Also can't wait for the love triangle! Unless you just want Jasmine and Aladdin together? That will be fine as long as Peter and Ariel stay together! :D haha look at me suggesting shtuff. I really really like this story! And the whole idea of it! :D please please never stop updating! (Like me :3 I'm soo lazy :3)
11/7/2013 c9 NarikotheShadow
Lol no way you are epic! This story is awesome! You have all my favorite pairings! Goodness this is gonna be freaking amazing! Pariel! And Alariel! D please update soon :D
Lol no way you are epic! This story is awesome! You have all my favorite pairings! Goodness this is gonna be freaking amazing! Pariel! And Alariel! D please update soon :D
10/14/2013 c8 NarikotheShadow
I know I said I was going to wait to review but this was a huuuuuuuuuge plot twist! Ack noooo Aladdin you Beef Jerky! *whispers* will there be any pariel? Peter/Ariel annnnnnnnyways! Can't wait for the update! Thanks for this awesome and sad chappie!
I know I said I was going to wait to review but this was a huuuuuuuuuge plot twist! Ack noooo Aladdin you Beef Jerky! *whispers* will there be any pariel? Peter/Ariel annnnnnnnyways! Can't wait for the update! Thanks for this awesome and sad chappie!
10/7/2013 c7 NarikotheShadow
Haha I feel like a stalker reviewing every chapter xD, I promise I'll lower the amount of reviews I post! But I really liked this chapter and I feel bad for jasmine but at the same time I want Ariel and Aladdin together! 3 so hopefully Aladdin and Ariel kiss in the next chapter since she was beat up and stuff. Anywaaaaaays keep updating your fabulously Awesome story! D
Haha I feel like a stalker reviewing every chapter xD, I promise I'll lower the amount of reviews I post! But I really liked this chapter and I feel bad for jasmine but at the same time I want Ariel and Aladdin together! 3 so hopefully Aladdin and Ariel kiss in the next chapter since she was beat up and stuff. Anywaaaaaays keep updating your fabulously Awesome story! D
9/23/2013 c6 NarikotheShadow
This story just keeps drawing me in, I love the humor and description. I should be updating my story but here I am reading and awaiting your story haha xD keep up the great work!
This story just keeps drawing me in, I love the humor and description. I should be updating my story but here I am reading and awaiting your story haha xD keep up the great work!
9/9/2013 c5 NarikotheShadow
Awesome story! I love to see your writing grow and become more amazing! Keep up the great work! Also I can't wait to read a peterpan and Ariel crossover! :D thanks for the update! :)
Awesome story! I love to see your writing grow and become more amazing! Keep up the great work! Also I can't wait to read a peterpan and Ariel crossover! :D thanks for the update! :)