for White Houses8/7/2013 c1 
61wtchcool
*thwacks Peter on the head* Just, *sighs* Evil geniuses shouldn't be so stupid. Poor Orwell. It's not that Daddy doesn't love you, it's just... well, he also loves ARK and he's a bit of a moron.
Gah! You got the name right in the summary, but then in the first sentence you wrote: "Nightmares gripped Jaime Flemming." Fleming should be one 'm.'
That freaking door! Ugh. The one thing that makes me wonder if we'd have been better off with a second season after all. If the toxin wasn't going to wear off on its own, it could've occurred to someone to work on an antidote. But no, more important to make Jaime conclude that insanity runs in the family. (Okay, I'm a bit opinionated.)
Congratulations on another well written fic! :)
61wtchcool*thwacks Peter on the head* Just, *sighs* Evil geniuses shouldn't be so stupid. Poor Orwell. It's not that Daddy doesn't love you, it's just... well, he also loves ARK and he's a bit of a moron.
Gah! You got the name right in the summary, but then in the first sentence you wrote: "Nightmares gripped Jaime Flemming." Fleming should be one 'm.'
That freaking door! Ugh. The one thing that makes me wonder if we'd have been better off with a second season after all. If the toxin wasn't going to wear off on its own, it could've occurred to someone to work on an antidote. But no, more important to make Jaime conclude that insanity runs in the family. (Okay, I'm a bit opinionated.)
Congratulations on another well written fic! :)