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4/26/2015 c1 Saku-Kinsheky
I crie...but its beatyful xD my bad writing atacks again
3/30/2015 c1 2Violet Akara
Gosh I LOVED this story!
Its soo cute and... kinda sad...
Still one of the best fics I've ever read!
I can't believe that 'I' died QwQ
Anyways its a good one Nana-san!
6/21/2014 c1 I like tortoises
*sobs*I forgot that I can't handle sad stories, and now I'm crying... WAAAAAAAAAAH! Demo, thank you for making the story! *sobs* it was good... 00000000000000000000000000000000000000 and something like that, does it mean I died?
8/6/2013 c1 kulaso
ummm... to make it seem better... how about making it look more... how should i say this... realistic. i kinda got boreded out but if you're still able to edit the story, how about fixing some scenes that way, nobody would feel bored reading it.
8/6/2013 c1 49Shiranai Atsune
Omg [f/n] died!
8/5/2013 c1 fortheloveoforange
Can't stop emoting... Soooooooooo cuuute! And kinda.. Sad... Uwaaaaahhh!

Great story! Love it! XD
8/5/2013 c1 19hakushinigami
This is short but sweet! I can't believe 'I' died... Sob...
Tsurugi: Dude... Why torture me?
I don't know, Tsurugi-san! What do you think?
Tsurugi: I'm OOC?
Um, you probably have that in your character.
Tsurugi: Oh.
Cool fic! XD
8/5/2013 c1 1SapphireSpade
Waaaaahhhhh! That's so sad! -gets a hankie out and blows her nose- But, that was the most beautiful story I've ever read...

I hope u update ur stories soon... WAAAAAHHHHHHHH! -still crying-

Spring's OCs: Um... -Sweat Dropped-
8/5/2013 c1 ShadowCyclone
A bit sad. But that's nothing compared to when ther person the reader is paired with dies. A tip for you... when writing reader x character stories try to lessen the use of (f/n) and such. Replace that with words like 'she' or 'her'. Example:

Tsurugi thought about [f/n] all day. Even when he was playing soccer. He just wanted to hug (f/n).

You can write it like this:
Tsurugi thought about (f/n) all day. Even when he was playing soccer. He just wanted to hug her.

That's it for now. Ja ne!

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