for Happy Anniversary9/14/2013 c1 
195Gamewizard2008
(Lol ironically, I made Virginia a smoke. XP) Hehehe, this was cute! up-arrow w up-arrow
195Gamewizard2008(Lol ironically, I made Virginia a smoke. XP) Hehehe, this was cute! up-arrow w up-arrow
8/7/2013 c1 catspats31
Even though your one-shot between the two is good in terms of writing quality and plot, please refrain from saying "I suck at summaries" on your summary. Saying that message on your summary shows a failure of "Show, Don't Tell". Please write a better summary that summarizes the story and never use the summary to say that the summary is rubbish. Here is a quote below to remind you why you shouldn't say "I suck at summaries" on your summary:
"If you can't write a decent summary, how the hell am I supposed to expect you to write a decent fanfic? Geez, at least if there's no summary at all, that way I can assume you're just lazy." -Anonymous
catspats31
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Even though your one-shot between the two is good in terms of writing quality and plot, please refrain from saying "I suck at summaries" on your summary. Saying that message on your summary shows a failure of "Show, Don't Tell". Please write a better summary that summarizes the story and never use the summary to say that the summary is rubbish. Here is a quote below to remind you why you shouldn't say "I suck at summaries" on your summary:
"If you can't write a decent summary, how the hell am I supposed to expect you to write a decent fanfic? Geez, at least if there's no summary at all, that way I can assume you're just lazy." -Anonymous
catspats31
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8/7/2013 c1 Guest
I read this in your other one-shot story and saw that I forgot to review that and I felt so sorry:( This is such an amazing one-shot, everything about their relationship is so funnyxD They're my fav KND couple and you just captured a great moment of theirs:D
I read this in your other one-shot story and saw that I forgot to review that and I felt so sorry:( This is such an amazing one-shot, everything about their relationship is so funnyxD They're my fav KND couple and you just captured a great moment of theirs:D