for Nightly Patrol Turns Into A Surprise!8/7/2013 c1 diyame
I love you :)
totally love this one...
Thank god liscor are together
I love you :)
totally love this one...
Thank god liscor are together
8/8/2013 c1 
14Selenehekate
I think this could have used a quick grammar edit, because I found it difficult to follow sometimes. Other than that, I thought your overall idea was really good and creative! Overall, good job! Here's your score in the "We're in a Relationship" Competition!
Title: 3/5
Creativity: 4/5
Grammar: 5/10
Believability: 6/10
Characterization: 5/10
Overall Story: 6/10
Total 29/50
14SelenehekateI think this could have used a quick grammar edit, because I found it difficult to follow sometimes. Other than that, I thought your overall idea was really good and creative! Overall, good job! Here's your score in the "We're in a Relationship" Competition!
Title: 3/5
Creativity: 4/5
Grammar: 5/10
Believability: 6/10
Characterization: 5/10
Overall Story: 6/10
Total 29/50