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9/12/2015 c3 IsPansy
Not much to review but the ieda of Buffy living with the Camdens is interesting..
8/16/2013 c4 5011604
You really need to give people more than a day to find, read, and review your story.

At this point, with only a few paragraphs total, there really isn't that much to review. I really can't even tell what the story is about.

Regarding chapter 3, whenever a new character speaks, you need to start a new paragraph. That's really all I can say.

Good luck, and try to be a little more patient.

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