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7/8/2017 c1 Guest
This Story Needs A Lot Of Work
6/19/2014 c1 24gabby1017
Hey Liz... There is so much going on that the story feels rushed... a lot of great ideas that need more detail and characterization...
But I enjoyed what I read... would love to see you take this further... really branch out your chapters.
8/6/2013 c1 Cristi
Lovely story, congrats Liz :)
8/6/2013 c1 cloemarrie
Good plot but with a little beta work it should be great.

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