8/8/2013 c1 Water
Hi Hoshi this story is pretty good but you know, a lot of people are going to be complaining that she is SUCH A MARY SUE! Still a good story but cut back the unicorn doing the healing was certainly better than she miraculously healing by herself the new ending is also better. More Please
Hi Hoshi this story is pretty good but you know, a lot of people are going to be complaining that she is SUCH A MARY SUE! Still a good story but cut back the unicorn doing the healing was certainly better than she miraculously healing by herself the new ending is also better. More Please