for A New Beginning4/1/2016 c1 Hazel1216717
Beautiful! I loved it!
Beautiful! I loved it!
8/25/2015 c1 
2wherethewaterstarts-andyouend
OMG this almost made me cry. It is SO sad! I love that song by Skillet to. It played in my head as I read! :)
2wherethewaterstarts-andyouendOMG this almost made me cry. It is SO sad! I love that song by Skillet to. It played in my head as I read! :)
8/21/2013 c1 catspats31
The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Skillet's "One Day Too Late" from MetroLyrics, it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:
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Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.
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In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.
Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.
catspats31
Member of Eliminator
The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Skillet's "One Day Too Late" from MetroLyrics, it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:
Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.
Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.
And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:
In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.
Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.
catspats31
Member of Eliminator
8/13/2013 c1 Sara
That was really good! Write another one shot!
That was really good! Write another one shot!
8/8/2013 c1 141ArtemisApollo97
Thalia's in Tartarus as well now? I mean, I'm glad they're together and all but GET THEM OUT! (Please :D )
141ArtemisApollo97Thalia's in Tartarus as well now? I mean, I'm glad they're together and all but GET THEM OUT! (Please :D )