for A Dangerous Game5/7/2019 c1 
623smiles
This story really caught my eye, and I loved the ending. I was wondering if you'd accept some help with editing/revision? I'd love to help. I think it'd become more powerful if some of the sentences flowed better.
623smilesThis story really caught my eye, and I loved the ending. I was wondering if you'd accept some help with editing/revision? I'd love to help. I think it'd become more powerful if some of the sentences flowed better.
2/11/2019 c4 23themirrorminder.372259
LOVED that you did an Arya POV! One of the brilliant D&D decisions was to have Arya and Tywin (instead of Roose) at Harrenhall - their dialgoue was epic. But, one of the great tragedies of the show, IMO, is that we never got to see Tywin's reaction to finding out his cupbearer was Arya Stark.
Well done - this story is brilliant :)
23themirrorminder.372259LOVED that you did an Arya POV! One of the brilliant D&D decisions was to have Arya and Tywin (instead of Roose) at Harrenhall - their dialgoue was epic. But, one of the great tragedies of the show, IMO, is that we never got to see Tywin's reaction to finding out his cupbearer was Arya Stark.
Well done - this story is brilliant :)
2/11/2019 c2 themirrorminder.372259
But his heart, the small part where his wife still resides" - what a BEAUTIFUL line! Well done! LOVE these one shots!
But his heart, the small part where his wife still resides" - what a BEAUTIFUL line! Well done! LOVE these one shots!
5/25/2016 c5 4Titania Faith
Oh my gods. I have so many emotions for Arya and Tywin and this summed them up really perfectly. Nearly crying, thank you for writing this, it was really well done. The second person was weird - merely cause I'm not used to it - but somehow it was perfect. I loved this.
4Titania FaithOh my gods. I have so many emotions for Arya and Tywin and this summed them up really perfectly. Nearly crying, thank you for writing this, it was really well done. The second person was weird - merely cause I'm not used to it - but somehow it was perfect. I loved this.
7/14/2015 c5 23themirrorminder.372259
This was absolutely beautifully well-written! Incredible! Please write more fics about this duo!
23themirrorminder.372259This was absolutely beautifully well-written! Incredible! Please write more fics about this duo!
5/23/2015 c3 3msydstery
Great fic, I really enjoyed it. I felt like you got Arya's and Tywin's relationship down perfect. Great stuff.
3msydsteryGreat fic, I really enjoyed it. I felt like you got Arya's and Tywin's relationship down perfect. Great stuff.
5/26/2014 c5 fostofina
Damn...I enjoyed this so much! thanks for writing this :)
Damn...I enjoyed this so much! thanks for writing this :)
4/15/2014 c5 2Hell Hath No
I do so wish theyd managed to meet up and neither of them had had to die..
Saved her again, damnit Tywin
2Hell Hath NoI do so wish theyd managed to meet up and neither of them had had to die..
Saved her again, damnit Tywin
4/13/2014 c4 Hell Hath No
i did so hope they'd confront each other more bluntly, i know they couldn't, but oh gods did i wish...
i did so hope they'd confront each other more bluntly, i know they couldn't, but oh gods did i wish...
4/13/2014 c3 Hell Hath No
for arya to be his legacy,,, that would be a true good death for tywin, maybe not an obvious continuation of his life but a lasting effect all the same
for arya to be his legacy,,, that would be a true good death for tywin, maybe not an obvious continuation of his life but a lasting effect all the same
4/13/2014 c2 Hell Hath No
arya and tywin as you said if they were not on opposing sides would have thrived in each others company, such a shame...
arya and tywin as you said if they were not on opposing sides would have thrived in each others company, such a shame...