for Carousel7/13/2014 c11 StyleStalker
Loved it so far! I totally understand the loss of inspiration or, let's call it mood, to write the story. Take the time that you need and come back to this when you are ready. But by then I, at least, would sincerely wish you to complete the story!
Loved it so far! I totally understand the loss of inspiration or, let's call it mood, to write the story. Take the time that you need and come back to this when you are ready. But by then I, at least, would sincerely wish you to complete the story!
10/1/2013 c9 Guest
Thank you. I read these chapters and made sounds like dying whales. Thank you so much.
Thank you. I read these chapters and made sounds like dying whales. Thank you so much.
10/1/2013 c4 Guest
Hey Tris!
Lovelovelove the story so far, it's getting exciting!* to be read with a trill*
:) keep on writing, I have faith in you!
Hey Tris!
Lovelovelove the story so far, it's getting exciting!* to be read with a trill*
:) keep on writing, I have faith in you!
9/21/2013 c11 your broken things
definitely thinking "what the *"&%?!" but anyway... hope you find your inspiration. You were right- your standard did go down- but you are an excellent writer, that much you can see.
definitely thinking "what the *"&%?!" but anyway... hope you find your inspiration. You were right- your standard did go down- but you are an excellent writer, that much you can see.
9/17/2013 c7 TheLightningBolt
Heya Tris
Just finished reading up to here!
Really good sadly i have homework to do :(
So will read the rest later or tomorrow
Hxxx
Heya Tris
Just finished reading up to here!
Really good sadly i have homework to do :(
So will read the rest later or tomorrow
Hxxx
9/17/2013 c1 TheLightningBolt
Hey Tris
REally good so far
Not sure if this is your favourite work or not.
Whatever it is, it is great!
Holzxxx
Hey Tris
REally good so far
Not sure if this is your favourite work or not.
Whatever it is, it is great!
Holzxxx
9/12/2013 c11 
1Phoenix-0987
hey mione!
this is awesome as always. coo u hav a joint account with Virg0luck!
update!
btw rr Chase pls
1Phoenix-0987hey mione!
this is awesome as always. coo u hav a joint account with Virg0luck!
update!
btw rr Chase pls
9/11/2013 c11 7havinghopeagainsthope
i pretty much enjoyed the story till now...feelin bad that ron killed himself...i hope the rest of the chapters are just as good as the previous ones!waiting for the rest of the story...:-)
7havinghopeagainsthopei pretty much enjoyed the story till now...feelin bad that ron killed himself...i hope the rest of the chapters are just as good as the previous ones!waiting for the rest of the story...:-)
9/11/2013 c11 8TheWrongAlice3
Ohmygosh you're a b****. Why would you torture me? You know I love this story. How could you keep it hanging?
YOU WERE MY FRIEND!
*HPandthePOA reference ;)*
Update quickly, yeah? Please :P
8TheWrongAlice3Ohmygosh you're a b****. Why would you torture me? You know I love this story. How could you keep it hanging?
YOU WERE MY FRIEND!
*HPandthePOA reference ;)*
Update quickly, yeah? Please :P
9/10/2013 c11 6bluebook1496
I hope you find your muse! And I loved it, even though I was like "what the heck just happened here..." Good job!
6bluebook1496I hope you find your muse! And I loved it, even though I was like "what the heck just happened here..." Good job!
9/9/2013 c11 2Hufflepuffelephant
Shame since i enjoyed this chapter but i promise to keep look out for 'paper butterflies' thanks :)
2HufflepuffelephantShame since i enjoyed this chapter but i promise to keep look out for 'paper butterflies' thanks :)
9/9/2013 c11 12ANEwrites
(I'm not going to try to convince you not to go on hiatus because I've been there and people yelling at you over the interwebs make you feel bad :D) tips: this is what I do to finish chapters: take two or three pieces of graph paper to school and when I have free time at lunch or before classes, just write whatever. It really helps to push those chapters out. :) (graph paper because there are more lines) hope to see you soon!
12ANEwrites(I'm not going to try to convince you not to go on hiatus because I've been there and people yelling at you over the interwebs make you feel bad :D) tips: this is what I do to finish chapters: take two or three pieces of graph paper to school and when I have free time at lunch or before classes, just write whatever. It really helps to push those chapters out. :) (graph paper because there are more lines) hope to see you soon!
9/9/2013 c11 15FreeSpiritSeeker
Definitely was thinking "What the ?!" but fantastic chapter, all the same. I love Draco's point about keeping some photos that show the real Ron. I'm sorry to hear you're going on hiatus with this story but I hope you come back to it refreshed and with lots of ideas for it. I look forward to reading more.
15FreeSpiritSeekerDefinitely was thinking "What the ?!" but fantastic chapter, all the same. I love Draco's point about keeping some photos that show the real Ron. I'm sorry to hear you're going on hiatus with this story but I hope you come back to it refreshed and with lots of ideas for it. I look forward to reading more.