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11/7/2020 c7 daniellapg26
the story is fine it just the oc who I don't like. her attitude about life and the choice that she's made are weird but great story so far.
9/3/2018 c8 25Arantxa2020
Oh shit
I really hope Will is alright. Keep up the gokd work.
8/16/2018 c7 maddypaddy30
update
6/23/2014 c1 Guest
are u gonna update
12/15/2013 c7 Guest
u should tell ur beta reader to teach u how to right more intresting stories
12/14/2013 c7 Bubblepop88
why would she be so scared to tell them about the storm cellar? shes doing it to help, shes not doing it for fun. honestly i think this story is pretty boring but im gonna still read it. hopefuly it gets interesting soon
11/22/2013 c6 Laura201112
This story rocks
11/22/2013 c5 Laura201112
This is a great story
11/22/2013 c4 Laura201112
Can't wait to read more
11/22/2013 c3 Laura201112
Love it
11/22/2013 c2 Laura201112
Keep up the good work that your doing
11/21/2013 c1 Laura201112
i really enjoy this story
10/22/2013 c6 Guest
I love this story! I can't wait to see Rick and Adrianne finally get together and I reeeeeally love it when Adrianne puts Lori in her place! The only problem I have is that she seems to kind of ignore Will and Nick so I think there should be a bit more interaction between them, but besides that everything is great and I hope you update soon.
10/11/2013 c5 Kara Roman
More please
10/8/2013 c5 TWDfan
This is an interesting story. I am enjoying it and you are taking your time setting everything up. Can't wait to read an update.
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