
7/4/2017 c12 FrostHunter
Yeah glad you fixed whole imprint thing that always seem like BAD way to TIE up LOSE ENDS with JACOB making SURE bella and edward stayed together imprinting on baby is wrong on so MANY levels glad that renessmee and danny found each other.
Yeah glad you fixed whole imprint thing that always seem like BAD way to TIE up LOSE ENDS with JACOB making SURE bella and edward stayed together imprinting on baby is wrong on so MANY levels glad that renessmee and danny found each other.
8/11/2016 c12 SuperiorBatman1
Cool I like the story the two hybrids found their other half like what you did with story good job.
Cool I like the story the two hybrids found their other half like what you did with story good job.
1/12/2014 c12 secretwhovianpony
This... this was awesome. At first, I wasn't too keen on the story since it did have a bit of a crossover with Scooby Doo and Dogma; but now that I have read it, I have found that this was very enjoyable. It ended way to quickly in my opinion though. Otherwise, I liked it! Oh ya! I just remembered! You have a few spelling errors. Make story just using the wrong spelling of a word. Like right. You have it a rite most of the time. O-O That isn't a spelling error. That's a grammatical error! *facepalm* Well, either way, there are a few errors.
This... this was awesome. At first, I wasn't too keen on the story since it did have a bit of a crossover with Scooby Doo and Dogma; but now that I have read it, I have found that this was very enjoyable. It ended way to quickly in my opinion though. Otherwise, I liked it! Oh ya! I just remembered! You have a few spelling errors. Make story just using the wrong spelling of a word. Like right. You have it a rite most of the time. O-O That isn't a spelling error. That's a grammatical error! *facepalm* Well, either way, there are a few errors.
1/10/2014 c12 2 lazy 2 log in
Not the best ending but I loved it *-*
Thought I wanted to know more about edward vs danny in front of the volturi
Hope to read another of your fics
Sin-NaMe
Not the best ending but I loved it *-*
Thought I wanted to know more about edward vs danny in front of the volturi
Hope to read another of your fics
Sin-NaMe
12/18/2013 c10 Guest
Are you going to continue this story or not?
Are you going to continue this story or not?
12/7/2013 c10 Guest
What's taking so long?
What's taking so long?
8/31/2013 c6
8Heroofthe13thDay
You know you just made a Warm Bodies reference? Really, the whole new nickname "R" sounds like a reference to Warm Bodies. (Its a book and a movie)

You know you just made a Warm Bodies reference? Really, the whole new nickname "R" sounds like a reference to Warm Bodies. (Its a book and a movie)
8/19/2013 c5 Guest
What happens next?
What happens next?
8/18/2013 c5 Guest
What happens next?
What happens next?