for Two times Tsunade won a bet and one time she didn't5/25/2016 c7 trebeh
Thanks for putting up the last chapters, I enjoyed the story. I know you wanted to leave it to the readers imagination but I wonder what you imagine her telling Jiraiya in the letter.
Thanks for putting up the last chapters, I enjoyed the story. I know you wanted to leave it to the readers imagination but I wonder what you imagine her telling Jiraiya in the letter.
5/23/2016 c4 trebeh
This story was beautifully written but I feel like it is unfinished; where you planning on writing a chapter depicting her response to finding out about Jiraiya's demise?
This story was beautifully written but I feel like it is unfinished; where you planning on writing a chapter depicting her response to finding out about Jiraiya's demise?
1/30/2014 c4 obsessed dreamer
oh, the helplessness...
i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
oh, the helplessness...
i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
1/30/2014 c3 obsessed dreamer
what i liked about this chapter was the silent affection between the two. not quite romance but it's there.
crit: this is a jiraiyaxtsunade fic. the scenes from the series are important, but they took up more than half of the chapter. I think you should give the two an equal amount of 'screen time' if not more :)
what i liked about this chapter was the silent affection between the two. not quite romance but it's there.
crit: this is a jiraiyaxtsunade fic. the scenes from the series are important, but they took up more than half of the chapter. I think you should give the two an equal amount of 'screen time' if not more :)
1/30/2014 c2 obsessed dreamer
The action scene was imaginative and well written.
The action scene was imaginative and well written.
1/30/2014 c1 obsessed dreamer
them feels...damn.
*tears*
them feels...damn.
*tears*
8/16/2013 c3 Guest
Great start for a story. There practically no great fanfic about these two. Well done and please keep on writing
Great start for a story. There practically no great fanfic about these two. Well done and please keep on writing
8/10/2013 c1 
3flowersandswords
This seems like a good story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
(You're right, Tsunade and Jiraiya should've been canon!)
3flowersandswordsThis seems like a good story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
(You're right, Tsunade and Jiraiya should've been canon!)