for You'll turn out fine11/3/2016 c9 88Darksoul88
O MY GOD Y U DO DIA TO MEH?! I FEEL LOST WITHOU THIS STORY I NEWD YO KNOW MORE CONTINUE!
O MY GOD Y U DO DIA TO MEH?! I FEEL LOST WITHOU THIS STORY I NEWD YO KNOW MORE CONTINUE!
6/4/2016 c2 Guest
it is a shame you didn't hold true to the character I call this a piece of shit. I don't think you are a real fan.
it is a shame you didn't hold true to the character I call this a piece of shit. I don't think you are a real fan.
5/31/2016 c9 
4Mystic Mists
In my opinion really, I think you should leave it alone, it's fine. Anyways people see the difference of how your grown. Also we want to know what happen next, and if you really want to rewrite it, then do it later. Not to be rude but just continue, anyways the story is awesome.
4Mystic MistsIn my opinion really, I think you should leave it alone, it's fine. Anyways people see the difference of how your grown. Also we want to know what happen next, and if you really want to rewrite it, then do it later. Not to be rude but just continue, anyways the story is awesome.
5/7/2016 c9 Pammy143
I think if you really should rewrite it so it becomes way better than from what you have started you should go for it
I think if you really should rewrite it so it becomes way better than from what you have started you should go for it
4/16/2016 c4 Moon Devil and Moon Angel
I was surprised when it said Inkheart,it really is a good I'm reading the sequel.
I was surprised when it said Inkheart,it really is a good I'm reading the sequel.
2/24/2016 c8 Melanie-chan
OMG
Me gusta tu historia :)
Espero que actualices pronto.
OMG
Me gusta tu historia :)
Espero que actualices pronto.
2/22/2016 c8 Mystic Mists
Well I loved this chapter a real lot, it was super awesome. And thanks you use the band Skillet, their music is spectacular. I especially loved Falling in the Black. Well anyways i hope you update this wonderful story soon. Keep up this amazing work. BTW: I know i will sound stupid asking this question but this is a Maka x Soul story, right? I'm kind of confused because i thought they would be friends but Maka said no so what will happen?
Well I loved this chapter a real lot, it was super awesome. And thanks you use the band Skillet, their music is spectacular. I especially loved Falling in the Black. Well anyways i hope you update this wonderful story soon. Keep up this amazing work. BTW: I know i will sound stupid asking this question but this is a Maka x Soul story, right? I'm kind of confused because i thought they would be friends but Maka said no so what will happen?
2/22/2016 c7 Mystic Mists
I want you to continue how it is. Anyways your a great writer now right i bet it will be even cooler, the next chapters and onward. Anyways i do have Kik, if you don't mind i would love to text you. I will love your response back to me.
I want you to continue how it is. Anyways your a great writer now right i bet it will be even cooler, the next chapters and onward. Anyways i do have Kik, if you don't mind i would love to text you. I will love your response back to me.
2/22/2016 c6 Mystic Mists
Man i love, love, love, love this chapter especially the part were Soul finally wants to be Maka friends. I hope because of this Maka won't be bullied anymore. Anyways it's uncool if a cool guy just stands there doing nothing for Maka. Well anyways it was great, keep up the good work
Man i love, love, love, love this chapter especially the part were Soul finally wants to be Maka friends. I hope because of this Maka won't be bullied anymore. Anyways it's uncool if a cool guy just stands there doing nothing for Maka. Well anyways it was great, keep up the good work
2/22/2016 c5 Mystic Mists
This chapter i was feeling pity for Maka and i thought i was going to cry. I can't believe she has a life as worse as this. I would love to change school if it only happen there, but if it also happens at home well i don't want to keep living this hell, i guess it is time, if you get where I'm going to. But i'm so glad i have a good life. Well anyways even though it wasn't long i love it. Keep writing.
This chapter i was feeling pity for Maka and i thought i was going to cry. I can't believe she has a life as worse as this. I would love to change school if it only happen there, but if it also happens at home well i don't want to keep living this hell, i guess it is time, if you get where I'm going to. But i'm so glad i have a good life. Well anyways even though it wasn't long i love it. Keep writing.
2/22/2016 c4 Mystic Mists
It was good, but I'm surprised, why would Guy here be worried for Maka? I think he was the brain behind this, and if you don't get this sorry but i don't want to explain. And i thought you said i would feel pity for Maka and even cry but i didn't, maybe because i didn't get it or there's nothing here. Well anyways it was good, keep writing like this.
It was good, but I'm surprised, why would Guy here be worried for Maka? I think he was the brain behind this, and if you don't get this sorry but i don't want to explain. And i thought you said i would feel pity for Maka and even cry but i didn't, maybe because i didn't get it or there's nothing here. Well anyways it was good, keep writing like this.
2/22/2016 c3 Mystic Mists
Hahahahah. This chapter was super duper funny. I laughed so hard my chest is acing maybe as hard as Maka's chest was. I very love the part when Maka does "Maka... CHOP!" And then Soul yells saying that's hurts. Like seriously, it's very funny. Please keep writing like this.
Hahahahah. This chapter was super duper funny. I laughed so hard my chest is acing maybe as hard as Maka's chest was. I very love the part when Maka does "Maka... CHOP!" And then Soul yells saying that's hurts. Like seriously, it's very funny. Please keep writing like this.
2/22/2016 c2 Mystic Mists
Man, that was shocking. First i thought 'why was Soul being suck a jerk, like seriously?' But happen at the end really did surprised me and said dot myself and chuckled 'so guy' can be nice after all' really good still
Man, that was shocking. First i thought 'why was Soul being suck a jerk, like seriously?' But happen at the end really did surprised me and said dot myself and chuckled 'so guy' can be nice after all' really good still
2/22/2016 c1 Mystic Mists
It was funny i got to say. It was a very good start. Keep writing like this. But i didn't like the history lesson, i got bored, but then my mom told me are you doing your homework but i really wanted to continue reading this then continue my homework so i read out loud the history lesson and the question. SO i like to thank you for that. HAhhaha.
It was funny i got to say. It was a very good start. Keep writing like this. But i didn't like the history lesson, i got bored, but then my mom told me are you doing your homework but i really wanted to continue reading this then continue my homework so i read out loud the history lesson and the question. SO i like to thank you for that. HAhhaha.