10/31/2015 c4 15AHWriter3622
It's a good story. I think Shelby should come back though. And do you edit these before you post them?
It's a good story. I think Shelby should come back though. And do you edit these before you post them?
12/13/2013 c8 Mercuris
You really need help with your grammar. It's a cool story, but being dyslexic, I can't keep up. Sorry
You really need help with your grammar. It's a cool story, but being dyslexic, I can't keep up. Sorry
11/23/2013 c8 Dearnoone97
I think she should move in with Santana and I think that she should get pregnant and then have a miscarriage. I know that sounds bad but that could be very interesting to the storyline.
Ps. This is a good story
I think she should move in with Santana and I think that she should get pregnant and then have a miscarriage. I know that sounds bad but that could be very interesting to the storyline.
Ps. This is a good story
10/29/2013 c7 nayamarieanderson0428
If you do make Rachel pregnant. Santana should know first. /no matter how much Rachel tries to push
Santana away, Santana won't let her. I don't really like Jesse. I have no idea who I would choose as new friendships. Also still don't like Shelby
If you do make Rachel pregnant. Santana should know first. /no matter how much Rachel tries to push
Santana away, Santana won't let her. I don't really like Jesse. I have no idea who I would choose as new friendships. Also still don't like Shelby
10/19/2013 c7 Guest
this sucks. You aren't using basic grammar. Your dialogue needs a little work, too. But most importantly, you rush. You want to depict a scene, and you rush to get there rather than building it up. I hope you are 14 and not a native speaker of English. That is the only excuse for this mess
this sucks. You aren't using basic grammar. Your dialogue needs a little work, too. But most importantly, you rush. You want to depict a scene, and you rush to get there rather than building it up. I hope you are 14 and not a native speaker of English. That is the only excuse for this mess
10/16/2013 c6 Guest
Update soon please
One of the best I have read
I love ur stories
Update soon please
One of the best I have read
I love ur stories