for When the prestent meets the future!5/29/2020 c11 Gmac
6 years, and you never came back.
6 years, and you never came back.
16/19/2019 c11 Guest
COME BACK PLEASE! ITS BEEN SIX YEARS
COME BACK PLEASE! ITS BEEN SIX YEARS
6/1/2019 c11 Guest
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2/11/2019 c10 Guest
I must say your story's premise is very good. And you have done a good job at writing it.
However, Your grammar needs a lot of work. It become atrocious to read after a while. Please put proper quotations and divide the story in to short paras.
I must say your story's premise is very good. And you have done a good job at writing it.
However, Your grammar needs a lot of work. It become atrocious to read after a while. Please put proper quotations and divide the story in to short paras.
1/11/2018 c11 SD
It's been 3 freakin year and still nothing!
It's been 3 freakin year and still nothing!
10/6/2017 c11 Ty
Continue the story
Continue the story
10/6/2017 c5 Ty
More man
More man
10/6/2017 c4 Ty
Come on man why'd you quite
Come on man why'd you quite
6/21/2017 c11 ironman1218
update its good
update its good