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9/27/2020 c6 foreverautumn99
nicely done
10/26/2014 c6 Kiral
I loved it and while I normally have nothing bad to say or review at all. Beyond Iile or love or enjoy their are a few that are hard to read
2/22/2014 c6 27Bookworm85
I love that McKittrick saluted Jess. Becker and Jess's flirting at the end of this chapter is really cute. And- "There is no way on Earth you could possibly love me as much as I love you." AWWW!
2/22/2014 c4 Bookworm85
Jess was awesome in taking out that dinosaur. I love how Becker was getting upset with Abby and then says, "I wasn't yelling, that's my normal tone of voice."
2/22/2014 c1 Bookworm85
"..unless my first name was Smith and last name was Wesson..." I laughed out loud!
12/25/2013 c6 33Cengiz
nice ending. and kudos to the team and your writing!

:o)
12/25/2013 c4 Cengiz
oh, it's getting even more interesting. good stuff so far.

they all doing great!

:o)
12/25/2013 c3 Cengiz
you're good with dialogs, and I don't complain about the length of the chapter!
12/24/2013 c1 Cengiz
That was a good start so far.

:)
11/11/2013 c6 3stephcullen2000
I love it please update again soon and feel free to check out my my latest story even if you don't watch the shows as you don't need to to read x
9/30/2013 c6 justanearthboundmisfit
Aww I love happy endings. Great story :)
9/29/2013 c6 Mijo54
Superbe et épique fin pour cette très belle première (et j'espère pas dernière !) histoire !
J'ai tout aimé : que Jess ose dire à Becker ce qu'elle ressent pour lui sans savoir s'il l'a entendu,
que Becker l'ait entendu,
le suspense quand nous ne savions pas où était Jess (j'ai ressenti la terreur de Becker à l'idée d'avoir perdu Jess)
les démêlés avec le corps médical
que ce soit Becker qui "retrouve" Jess
Que les soldats aient pour Jess un peu de la considération qu'ils ont pour Becker
mais plus que tout ce que j'ai aimé c'est que Becker dise à Jess " I don't feel the same as you because there is no way on Earth you could possibly love me as much as I love you. I'm sorry it took your having to take down 5 dinosaurs to get me to admit it…" aaaahh j'ai adoré ...et les baisers !
Bravo pour cette histoire qui était passionnante, et j'espère que vous nous en offrirez d'autres !
à bientôt de vous lire !
9/19/2013 c6 5Prawn Crackers
Wooohooo! What a beautiful story! I love the idea behind it and the way you wrote it!

I do hope you will write many more!

Well done! YAY!

PS: Thank you for the thank you! :-)
9/16/2013 c6 CKC8867
Great job on your first story! Very tense and exciting final chapter. Jess and Connor were all kinds of awesome as were the rest of the team. Loved the Top Gun bit. Great interaction between all the characters and I think you captured everybody right on. I really enjoyed this and hope to see more from you in the future.
9/16/2013 c6 Guest
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
I'm so so glad you kept this as one big part because it's brilliant!

Tense and exciting and just when I thought it was going to end with an evil cliffhanger, Becker found Jess and all was right with the world again.

Have I mentioned recently how glad I am you decided to write this? And how I really, really hope you'll be willing to write more Jecker stories?

I love Jess and Connor taking charge and handling the situation, Jess's confession to Becker - and the fact he heard it - made me squee out loud in the office (my boss thinks I'm a bit crazier than normal) and Lester's line about being in an alternate universe made me laugh.

Really truly enjoyed this and hope to read more from you soon! ;)
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