for Fish9/16/2013 c6 
15SolarLunar
Brilliant ending! Nervous for Jess for a minute and wish Becker had been able to hear her declaration, but glad he admitted his feelings anyway.
Thanks for a great story.
15SolarLunarBrilliant ending! Nervous for Jess for a minute and wish Becker had been able to hear her declaration, but glad he admitted his feelings anyway.
Thanks for a great story.
9/16/2013 c6 20Rubytronix
Brilliant final chapter- really exciting, and Becker and Jess! *Sighs!* Look forward to reading a new fic from you soon, I hope!
20RubytronixBrilliant final chapter- really exciting, and Becker and Jess! *Sighs!* Look forward to reading a new fic from you soon, I hope!
9/15/2013 c6 13YouHaveLovelyHair
Oh my goodness - what a fabulous end to a brilliant story!
Loved Jess and Connor's Top Gun chat - and the fact that Becker got the Comms back up long enough to hear Jess...awwwww :-)
And when he finds her *sigh* Just wonderful!
One teeny tiny niggle - it's Lara Croft, not Laura :-)
So enjoyed this story - definitely one of my favourites. I really hope you decide to write more.
xxx
13YouHaveLovelyHairOh my goodness - what a fabulous end to a brilliant story!
Loved Jess and Connor's Top Gun chat - and the fact that Becker got the Comms back up long enough to hear Jess...awwwww :-)
And when he finds her *sigh* Just wonderful!
One teeny tiny niggle - it's Lara Croft, not Laura :-)
So enjoyed this story - definitely one of my favourites. I really hope you decide to write more.
xxx
9/10/2013 c5 5Prawn Crackers
Love how Jess was doing a "Becker" and impressed the two soldiers! I just hope the soldiers are better shooters than analysts...
Good for Matt to have discovered all that information!
So, into battle! May they all come out unharmed!
5Prawn CrackersLove how Jess was doing a "Becker" and impressed the two soldiers! I just hope the soldiers are better shooters than analysts...
Good for Matt to have discovered all that information!
So, into battle! May they all come out unharmed!
9/9/2013 c5 Mijo54
J'aime que Jess prenne confiance en elle et trouve la force de se faire obéir par ce soldat trop zélé !
la force de Jess c'est d'être avec Connor, et de bénéficier de ses connaissances scientifiques et la force de Connor c'est d'être avec Jess, le meilleur de tous les FCO !
attends le prochain chapitre avec impatience ! histoire trépidante !
à bientôt de vous lire !
J'aime que Jess prenne confiance en elle et trouve la force de se faire obéir par ce soldat trop zélé !
la force de Jess c'est d'être avec Connor, et de bénéficier de ses connaissances scientifiques et la force de Connor c'est d'être avec Jess, le meilleur de tous les FCO !
attends le prochain chapitre avec impatience ! histoire trépidante !
à bientôt de vous lire !
9/8/2013 c5 20Rubytronix
Way to go Jess! Show them who's in charge! This just gets more exciting as it goes on! Can't wait for more!
20RubytronixWay to go Jess! Show them who's in charge! This just gets more exciting as it goes on! Can't wait for more!
9/8/2013 c5 72DrawnToDarkness
Go, Jess! Your Captain would be so proud! *grins like a fool* I love her taking control and standing up to the soldiers - and I love that they listen to her and trust her. That just makes me squee.
Really loving this story and the way you're writing all of the characters - and the way you're building up the tension, too! I don't know if I can wait a week for another part - meep!
Loving it very much - and hope you've well and truly caught the writing bug and do more after this story! ;)
72DrawnToDarknessGo, Jess! Your Captain would be so proud! *grins like a fool* I love her taking control and standing up to the soldiers - and I love that they listen to her and trust her. That just makes me squee.
Really loving this story and the way you're writing all of the characters - and the way you're building up the tension, too! I don't know if I can wait a week for another part - meep!
Loving it very much - and hope you've well and truly caught the writing bug and do more after this story! ;)
9/7/2013 c5 13YouHaveLovelyHair
Great chapter! And Yaay - go Captain Jess keeping those insubordinate soldiers in line. I really do love your portrayal of Jess in this story. I like feisty Jess!
It's great how you've got the team working in their unfamiliar roles yet able to adapt and still pull together and find a solution.
Looking forward to more! :-)
13YouHaveLovelyHairGreat chapter! And Yaay - go Captain Jess keeping those insubordinate soldiers in line. I really do love your portrayal of Jess in this story. I like feisty Jess!
It's great how you've got the team working in their unfamiliar roles yet able to adapt and still pull together and find a solution.
Looking forward to more! :-)
9/4/2013 c4 Mijo54
Le fait d'avoir interverti les rôles fait que chacun peut apprécier les qualités et les mérites de l'autre, surtout celui qu'il remplace !
J'aime que Jess se fasse du souci au sujet du baiser qu'elle a donné à Becker...et qu'elle soit rassurée par le "Stay warm" que lui murmure Becker ! private joke !
J'aime que Becker les appelle par leur nom de famille comme il le ferait pour ses soldats !
Mais je n'aime pas trop que vous nous laissiez sur ce cliffhanger à la fin du chapitre ...à moins que vous ne nous donniez rapidement la suite ! Please, please update soon !
à bientôt de vous lire !
Le fait d'avoir interverti les rôles fait que chacun peut apprécier les qualités et les mérites de l'autre, surtout celui qu'il remplace !
J'aime que Jess se fasse du souci au sujet du baiser qu'elle a donné à Becker...et qu'elle soit rassurée par le "Stay warm" que lui murmure Becker ! private joke !
J'aime que Becker les appelle par leur nom de famille comme il le ferait pour ses soldats !
Mais je n'aime pas trop que vous nous laissiez sur ce cliffhanger à la fin du chapitre ...à moins que vous ne nous donniez rapidement la suite ! Please, please update soon !
à bientôt de vous lire !
9/4/2013 c4 5Prawn Crackers
Awww I loved the "stay warm" comment! :-) :-) :-)
I'm a little worried Jess abd Cobnor will have to seal with a pack of raptors soon...
Love how they all appreciate the other team members' skills now that they have to do the others' jobs.
The troodons sound positively scary! *shudders*
I am soooo looking forward to read the "things" Becker wants to talk about to Jess! :-)
Awesome chapter! I love the angsty, high tention atmosphere you have created! YAY!
5Prawn CrackersAwww I loved the "stay warm" comment! :-) :-) :-)
I'm a little worried Jess abd Cobnor will have to seal with a pack of raptors soon...
Love how they all appreciate the other team members' skills now that they have to do the others' jobs.
The troodons sound positively scary! *shudders*
I am soooo looking forward to read the "things" Becker wants to talk about to Jess! :-)
Awesome chapter! I love the angsty, high tention atmosphere you have created! YAY!
8/31/2013 c4 Fairepeacock
This is a fun story. I think this is the first time I've seen this scenario in a fic so good on you!
This is a fun story. I think this is the first time I've seen this scenario in a fic so good on you!
9/2/2013 c3 Mijo54
Quelle idée géniale d'intervertir les rôles de nos amis !
Je ne pense pas encore avoir lu quelque chose comme çà !
Jess remplacée par Becker et Abby (il en faut bien 2 pour faire son travail aussi bien qu'elle !)
Connor remplacé par Matt , Becker et Abby remplacés par Connor, qui même s'il est une catastrophe ambulante
est habitué au terrain, ...et Jess qui elle est totalement néophyte en la matière !
oooohh j'adore le baiser *gros soupir* ...et Becker le rend *re-gros soupir*
j'adore votre histoire !
à bientôt de vous lire !
Quelle idée géniale d'intervertir les rôles de nos amis !
Je ne pense pas encore avoir lu quelque chose comme çà !
Jess remplacée par Becker et Abby (il en faut bien 2 pour faire son travail aussi bien qu'elle !)
Connor remplacé par Matt , Becker et Abby remplacés par Connor, qui même s'il est une catastrophe ambulante
est habitué au terrain, ...et Jess qui elle est totalement néophyte en la matière !
oooohh j'adore le baiser *gros soupir* ...et Becker le rend *re-gros soupir*
j'adore votre histoire !
à bientôt de vous lire !
9/2/2013 c4 CKC8867
Well this just keeps getting more and more exciting. I am really enjoying it. Love the bit with Abby and Becker squabbling with each other while trying to do Jess' job. Vulnerable Becker is very appealing, especially when he is finally coming to terms with his feelings about certain people. Matt, Connor and Jess are all brilliantly written as well. You are really doing a great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Well this just keeps getting more and more exciting. I am really enjoying it. Love the bit with Abby and Becker squabbling with each other while trying to do Jess' job. Vulnerable Becker is very appealing, especially when he is finally coming to terms with his feelings about certain people. Matt, Connor and Jess are all brilliantly written as well. You are really doing a great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
9/1/2013 c4 15SolarLunar
Oh, this is so tense.
Loving Becker's instruction to Jess, they are adorable and Jess had better get back alive for Becker to make good on his new resolve with her.
Becker and Abby are hilarious and poor Matt too, as they're all working hard to save everyone.
More please! ;-)
15SolarLunarOh, this is so tense.
Loving Becker's instruction to Jess, they are adorable and Jess had better get back alive for Becker to make good on his new resolve with her.
Becker and Abby are hilarious and poor Matt too, as they're all working hard to save everyone.
More please! ;-)
9/1/2013 c3 5Prawn Crackers
I love it! It's brilliant!
Love how they are all finding themselves in different, unusual roles!
I like that Jess gets to have Becker's big weapon! She's much tougher than she's given credit for...
Love Matt's "What would Connor do?"
Definitely loved the kiss! Definitely! :-)
Don't worry about your dialogues! They are perfect! YAY!
5Prawn CrackersI love it! It's brilliant!
Love how they are all finding themselves in different, unusual roles!
I like that Jess gets to have Becker's big weapon! She's much tougher than she's given credit for...
Love Matt's "What would Connor do?"
Definitely loved the kiss! Definitely! :-)
Don't worry about your dialogues! They are perfect! YAY!