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72DrawnToDarkness
Eeeep! I love Abby and Becker's little moment, and Connor and Jess being brilliant out in the field (because, really, they're brilliant everywhere!)
And Becker telling Jess to stay warm made me grin like an idiot at the screen :)
Really love this - you've got them all written perfectly in character even though they're outside of their comfort zones and I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
More soon, please? :)
72DrawnToDarknessEeeep! I love Abby and Becker's little moment, and Connor and Jess being brilliant out in the field (because, really, they're brilliant everywhere!)
And Becker telling Jess to stay warm made me grin like an idiot at the screen :)
Really love this - you've got them all written perfectly in character even though they're outside of their comfort zones and I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
More soon, please? :)
9/1/2013 c2 5Prawn Crackers
This us brilliant!
Becker admiring and appreciating Jess' skills was one of my favourite scenes.
His protecting instincts toeards her and the two running hand in hand was another one I totally loved!
And it is so Becker to worry about being distractedd from his job by dreaming about Jess!
Poor Matt, being trapped!
Great action and angst in this chapter! And the scary incursion! *shudders*
5Prawn CrackersThis us brilliant!
Becker admiring and appreciating Jess' skills was one of my favourite scenes.
His protecting instincts toeards her and the two running hand in hand was another one I totally loved!
And it is so Becker to worry about being distractedd from his job by dreaming about Jess!
Poor Matt, being trapped!
Great action and angst in this chapter! And the scary incursion! *shudders*
8/31/2013 c1 Prawn Crackers
What a great start!
Love all the awkward flirting!
Love all the interaction between the team member!
Witty and well written - yay!
What a great start!
Love all the awkward flirting!
Love all the interaction between the team member!
Witty and well written - yay!
8/31/2013 c4 20Rubytronix
Argh! No! So very exciting! This is a fabulous fic and written brilliantly! So looking forward to the next chapter... I hope they'll both be OK? We all love a slightly 'whumped' Connor, of course but not too much! Pretty please...
20RubytronixArgh! No! So very exciting! This is a fabulous fic and written brilliantly! So looking forward to the next chapter... I hope they'll both be OK? We all love a slightly 'whumped' Connor, of course but not too much! Pretty please...
8/31/2013 c4 13YouHaveLovelyHair
OMG this story just keeps getting better and better!
Love the action - Connor and Jess working perfectly together. And Becker and Abby made me smile a lot!
Love the Jecker too - "stay warm" made me giggle :D
And I really love how you have got inside their heads - Jess using her FCO skills, Becker realising he needs the chance to tell her how he feels etc.
Brilliant and I'm so looking forward to the next chapter :-)
13YouHaveLovelyHairOMG this story just keeps getting better and better!
Love the action - Connor and Jess working perfectly together. And Becker and Abby made me smile a lot!
Love the Jecker too - "stay warm" made me giggle :D
And I really love how you have got inside their heads - Jess using her FCO skills, Becker realising he needs the chance to tell her how he feels etc.
Brilliant and I'm so looking forward to the next chapter :-)
8/29/2013 c3 15SolarLunar
This is so good. I really like the mix up of roles; really brings out something different in the characters... including protective Becker.
Hope to read more soon.
15SolarLunarThis is so good. I really like the mix up of roles; really brings out something different in the characters... including protective Becker.
Hope to read more soon.
8/25/2013 c3 13YouHaveLovelyHair
Oh my gosh! What a fantastic chapter! And don't worry about long - readers love long chapters! :-)
Loved the action - poor Becker and Abby. Loved the Jecker - awwwwww *squee*
Loving Action!Jess - she's so cool!
One last thing - I'm naming this chapter "Dory" :-) "Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, swimming, swimming - what do we do, we swim, swim, swim..." Hee hee hee :D
13YouHaveLovelyHairOh my gosh! What a fantastic chapter! And don't worry about long - readers love long chapters! :-)
Loved the action - poor Becker and Abby. Loved the Jecker - awwwwww *squee*
Loving Action!Jess - she's so cool!
One last thing - I'm naming this chapter "Dory" :-) "Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, swimming, swimming - what do we do, we swim, swim, swim..." Hee hee hee :D
8/25/2013 c3 20Rubytronix
Fantastic chapter! Go, Connor and Jess! Great to see these two working together. Very exciting and well described battle with the dinos... more very soon, please!
20RubytronixFantastic chapter! Go, Connor and Jess! Great to see these two working together. Very exciting and well described battle with the dinos... more very soon, please!
8/24/2013 c3 72DrawnToDarkness
Ooooooooh! This is so so good! I love seeing them all a bit out of their comfort zones, and having Jess & Connor being the ones who ultimately have to save the day is fantastic! You know how much I love Jess and I just really adore the way you're writing her in this - all of them, really, but especially Jess :)
And I loved the Jecker kiss! *happy sigh* The perfect incentive, indeed!
Seriously looking forward to more! x
72DrawnToDarknessOoooooooh! This is so so good! I love seeing them all a bit out of their comfort zones, and having Jess & Connor being the ones who ultimately have to save the day is fantastic! You know how much I love Jess and I just really adore the way you're writing her in this - all of them, really, but especially Jess :)
And I loved the Jecker kiss! *happy sigh* The perfect incentive, indeed!
Seriously looking forward to more! x
8/24/2013 c2 i am irresponsible
I love it so far! It's very interesting! Great start!
Hope you post soon!
I love it so far! It's very interesting! Great start!
Hope you post soon!
8/22/2013 c2 CKC8867
Oooooo you've got a pretty exciting little story going here. It's well written and the characterization is right on. I look forward to seeing how this all ends up. Great job!
Oooooo you've got a pretty exciting little story going here. It's well written and the characterization is right on. I look forward to seeing how this all ends up. Great job!
8/22/2013 c2 Mijo54
Waouw ! le moins qu'on puisse dire c'est que vous nous projeter rapidement dans l'action !
et quelle action ! des explosions, Matt et Connor séparés, les soldats de Becker enfermés, les comms en baisse !
Heureusement Becker est avec Jess ! j'ai aimé qu'il veuille la protéger malgré tout...et vous nous laissez avec ce cliffhanger terrible ! que va-t-il arriver à nos amis ! merci de mettre à jour comme vous dites et ne pas nous faire attendre trop longtemps !
à bientôt de vous lire !
Waouw ! le moins qu'on puisse dire c'est que vous nous projeter rapidement dans l'action !
et quelle action ! des explosions, Matt et Connor séparés, les soldats de Becker enfermés, les comms en baisse !
Heureusement Becker est avec Jess ! j'ai aimé qu'il veuille la protéger malgré tout...et vous nous laissez avec ce cliffhanger terrible ! que va-t-il arriver à nos amis ! merci de mettre à jour comme vous dites et ne pas nous faire attendre trop longtemps !
à bientôt de vous lire !
8/22/2013 c1 Mijo54
C'est sympa, après vous avoir croisé maintes fois dans les commentaires (oui, j'avoue que je lis aussi les commentaires des histoires que je lis !) de voir que vous avez eu le courage de prendre la plume et je dois dire que le résultat est plutôt brillant !
j'aime beaucoup la façon dont vous voyez Jess et Becker, et j'aime ce début d'histoire ! je serai heureuse de vous accompagner jusqu'au bout de cette histoire (et d'autres !)
à bientôt de vous lire !
I hope you understand french, si no tell me I can write in english with a translator !
C'est sympa, après vous avoir croisé maintes fois dans les commentaires (oui, j'avoue que je lis aussi les commentaires des histoires que je lis !) de voir que vous avez eu le courage de prendre la plume et je dois dire que le résultat est plutôt brillant !
j'aime beaucoup la façon dont vous voyez Jess et Becker, et j'aime ce début d'histoire ! je serai heureuse de vous accompagner jusqu'au bout de cette histoire (et d'autres !)
à bientôt de vous lire !
I hope you understand french, si no tell me I can write in english with a translator !
8/20/2013 c2 13YouHaveLovelyHair
Brilliant chapter. Loved Becker's concern for Jess and his conflict - very him! :-)
And Matt and Connor was pure genius!
Looking forward to your next update :-)
13YouHaveLovelyHairBrilliant chapter. Loved Becker's concern for Jess and his conflict - very him! :-)
And Matt and Connor was pure genius!
Looking forward to your next update :-)