for Fish8/20/2013 c2 
20Rubytronix
Brilliant chapter- so exciting! Can't wait for your next update- fab writing!
20RubytronixBrilliant chapter- so exciting! Can't wait for your next update- fab writing!
8/19/2013 c2 72DrawnToDarkness
Oooh, how exciting! Loving this so much - having the team pretty much on their own with lots of anomalies and potential incursions and no way of communicating - eeeeeeep!
Loved Becker's instincts screaming at him to protect Jess (and I squeed at the thought of them running hand-in-hand to the hub *g*) - and I love his admiration of her skills and acknowledgement that what she does is pretty much amazing. *waves banner in support of our lovely Field Coordinator*
Really looking forward to the next chapter and looking forward to seeing where you take the story! :)
72DrawnToDarknessOooh, how exciting! Loving this so much - having the team pretty much on their own with lots of anomalies and potential incursions and no way of communicating - eeeeeeep!
Loved Becker's instincts screaming at him to protect Jess (and I squeed at the thought of them running hand-in-hand to the hub *g*) - and I love his admiration of her skills and acknowledgement that what she does is pretty much amazing. *waves banner in support of our lovely Field Coordinator*
Really looking forward to the next chapter and looking forward to seeing where you take the story! :)
8/13/2013 c1 13YouHaveLovelyHair
Brilliant start! Loved the Jecker - and Abby's teasing!
Looking forward to more :-)
13YouHaveLovelyHairBrilliant start! Loved the Jecker - and Abby's teasing!
Looking forward to more :-)
8/13/2013 c1 72DrawnToDarkness
Yayayay! I made a little squee sound when I saw you'd posted because I knew it'd be good - and I wasn't wrong!
This is a brilliant start - so looking forward to seeing more from your Jess & Becker! I love the way you've written them (and everyone else) so far and can't wait for it to continue!
Yay for you posting!
72DrawnToDarknessYayayay! I made a little squee sound when I saw you'd posted because I knew it'd be good - and I wasn't wrong!
This is a brilliant start - so looking forward to seeing more from your Jess & Becker! I love the way you've written them (and everyone else) so far and can't wait for it to continue!
Yay for you posting!
8/12/2013 c1 20Rubytronix
Fab chapter and a really great start. I like the way you portray the characters and I can't wait to see what's going to happen.
20RubytronixFab chapter and a really great start. I like the way you portray the characters and I can't wait to see what's going to happen.