for Tales of Ash: Kanto Chronicles8/16/2013 c2 
4Lincoln859
A good start. I don't believe that a new trainer should have had such an easy time against Team Rocket, even if Jessie and James are more goofballs than trainers, but it's your story.
4Lincoln859A good start. I don't believe that a new trainer should have had such an easy time against Team Rocket, even if Jessie and James are more goofballs than trainers, but it's your story.
8/15/2013 c2 5Garm88
Good: you don't have levels incorporated into the fic.
Bad: it seems like you're rushing pretty hard.
5Garm88Good: you don't have levels incorporated into the fic.
Bad: it seems like you're rushing pretty hard.
8/14/2013 c2 Guest
Love the story.
Love the story.
8/14/2013 c2 Guest
Cool story can his pokemon evolve thou?
Cool story can his pokemon evolve thou?
8/14/2013 c2 RoyalTwinFangs
Very nice. Will follow. Will all or most of Ash's pokemon evolve to their final form? Update soon.
Very nice. Will follow. Will all or most of Ash's pokemon evolve to their final form? Update soon.
8/13/2013 c1 25DualStarduster
Nice, grammar error here and there, but you also forgot 1 move for Pikachu.
In the battle he used double team, yet the move was not listed on known moves.
25DualStardusterNice, grammar error here and there, but you also forgot 1 move for Pikachu.
In the battle he used double team, yet the move was not listed on known moves.