for Tales of Ash: Kanto Chronicles8/7/2014 c9 
12Gold Testament
WHAT THE?! YOU ONLY HAD 9 CHAPTERS POSTED ON THIS STORY?! It was so epic I didn't even know I hit the end of the line.
12Gold TestamentWHAT THE?! YOU ONLY HAD 9 CHAPTERS POSTED ON THIS STORY?! It was so epic I didn't even know I hit the end of the line.
8/7/2014 c7 Gold Testament
Hopefully you got Damien's Pokémon removed too and given to more responsible trainers.
Hopefully you got Damien's Pokémon removed too and given to more responsible trainers.
7/14/2014 c9 11stars90
I like your character of Styles. Food fight was a great move against the Rockets, can't wait to see how it plays out!
11stars90I like your character of Styles. Food fight was a great move against the Rockets, can't wait to see how it plays out!
7/9/2014 c9 Duo8834
This is a good story so far, but the grammer could use a little work. The only major thing that I see wrong is that you still have Ash with sandshrew, but sandshrew evolved into sandslash in Ash's third gym battle.
This is a good story so far, but the grammer could use a little work. The only major thing that I see wrong is that you still have Ash with sandshrew, but sandshrew evolved into sandslash in Ash's third gym battle.
7/9/2014 c9 2Rzen
Sandshrew evolved last chapter into Sandslash. Didn't he? I looked and you very clearly said last chapter that he evolved. I'm confused T_T
2RzenSandshrew evolved last chapter into Sandslash. Didn't he? I looked and you very clearly said last chapter that he evolved. I'm confused T_T
7/9/2014 c9 1SaiyanIncubus
Yay Milkshakes :D, Nice Job with Style's, I liked this version of him a lot, Good Job, and keep going.
O_O
1SaiyanIncubusYay Milkshakes :D, Nice Job with Style's, I liked this version of him a lot, Good Job, and keep going.
O_O
7/9/2014 c9 FF8cerberus
That was intense. I'm starting to think he's going to have only shiny pokemon on his team. Oh well. It'll make him more unique as a trainer. Until next time.
That was intense. I'm starting to think he's going to have only shiny pokemon on his team. Oh well. It'll make him more unique as a trainer. Until next time.