for Undercover1/23/2014 c12 Kandyj
Awwww sasukes so cute he so adorable who knew he could b so nice to Hinata :) hope to see more chaps in the future
Awwww sasukes so cute he so adorable who knew he could b so nice to Hinata :) hope to see more chaps in the future
1/25/2014 c12 cocopuff123
Now we finally figure out how he got that crazy soul sucking jutsu and SASUKE AND HINATA KISS! XD.
Now we finally figure out how he got that crazy soul sucking jutsu and SASUKE AND HINATA KISS! XD.
1/25/2014 c3 mac2
Nice empathetic moment, too bad it distracted them. I am liking this fic very much. No glaring errors and good progression on the Sasuhina.
Nice empathetic moment, too bad it distracted them. I am liking this fic very much. No glaring errors and good progression on the Sasuhina.
1/25/2014 c2 mac2
It would have Ben so funny if she had completely dropped the towel. Bet she would be red from head to toe!
It would have Ben so funny if she had completely dropped the towel. Bet she would be red from head to toe!
1/22/2014 c12 Guest
Yep, the kiss solves all... :P It's great to see the progress between them :) Thanks for updating :) (I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw that this was updated :D) It's great to know the background story of Nakamura and how he obtained his powers :P
Yep, the kiss solves all... :P It's great to see the progress between them :) Thanks for updating :) (I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw that this was updated :D) It's great to know the background story of Nakamura and how he obtained his powers :P
1/24/2014 c12 reneelg1963
So the knight in shining armor, saved the damsel! Sweet! he really stepped for her, even shielded her from harms way. This was an exciting chapter!
So the knight in shining armor, saved the damsel! Sweet! he really stepped for her, even shielded her from harms way. This was an exciting chapter!
1/23/2014 c12 
13aurora0914
The kiss was nice. Although I didn't find the flashback amusing- those throw you off the real story.
It was a good chapter. I await your update.
13aurora0914The kiss was nice. Although I didn't find the flashback amusing- those throw you off the real story.
It was a good chapter. I await your update.
1/22/2014 c12 NaruHinalover19
oh my gosh such an awesome chapter :D Arigato for updating please write more :D
oh my gosh such an awesome chapter :D Arigato for updating please write more :D
1/15/2014 c11 Guest
I really love the plot! I can't wait to see what will happen :)
I really love the plot! I can't wait to see what will happen :)