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291/23/2017 c16 Guest
You wrote this piece so beautiful, the development was absolutely incredible. I just love it so much compare to every other sasuhina fanfics with rushed development.
You wrote this piece so beautiful, the development was absolutely incredible. I just love it so much compare to every other sasuhina fanfics with rushed development.
8/6/2016 c16 Guest
I agree . I want more of SasuHina fluff. Please can you be so kind to write an epilogue
I agree . I want more of SasuHina fluff. Please can you be so kind to write an epilogue
8/4/2016 c16 Manisha
I did enjoy reading everyline of the story. The story didnt not have one single dull moment. Hinatas progress looked very natural. Your story made it look like hinata and sasuke were meant to be together, somehow it worked better that naruhina pairing story in the last. Hinatas character wasnt one dimensional like that in manga. She cared for her family, her friends, her clan, her mother. Her story wasnt one of prophecies but her own hardwork and struggle. Even the main character in the real manga naruto, sasuke and sakura were too one dimensional. I liked your style of writing giving solid dialogues and you tendency of not wasting words on unnecessary things. You handle romance very well you just know how love works. The best part was everyone looked very close to the character in the real manga especially sasuke, hinata, kiba, sakura pretty much though naruto looked a little off.
but what irked me was the motive of nakamaru kidnapping shanji wasnt clear why would demon need money? Nakamarus intention and plot weren very well dealt with, as in why he just waited for the party to happen? he could control anyone anytime so why wait. Although i liked the demon taking control of soul concept but hinata escaping that just because she had a pure? heart didnt go down well with me, especially since its a shinobi world. Hinata made team leader in her very first mission was a little suprising t me.
I did enjoy reading everyline of the story. The story didnt not have one single dull moment. Hinatas progress looked very natural. Your story made it look like hinata and sasuke were meant to be together, somehow it worked better that naruhina pairing story in the last. Hinatas character wasnt one dimensional like that in manga. She cared for her family, her friends, her clan, her mother. Her story wasnt one of prophecies but her own hardwork and struggle. Even the main character in the real manga naruto, sasuke and sakura were too one dimensional. I liked your style of writing giving solid dialogues and you tendency of not wasting words on unnecessary things. You handle romance very well you just know how love works. The best part was everyone looked very close to the character in the real manga especially sasuke, hinata, kiba, sakura pretty much though naruto looked a little off.
but what irked me was the motive of nakamaru kidnapping shanji wasnt clear why would demon need money? Nakamarus intention and plot weren very well dealt with, as in why he just waited for the party to happen? he could control anyone anytime so why wait. Although i liked the demon taking control of soul concept but hinata escaping that just because she had a pure? heart didnt go down well with me, especially since its a shinobi world. Hinata made team leader in her very first mission was a little suprising t me.
1/30/2016 c16 Guest
Please continue
Please continue
12/29/2015 c16 Guest
So amazingly cute
So amazingly cute
11/28/2015 c16 reneelg1963
Did u ever get the ten reviews? I was locked out of my account, but I loved this story! please do the wedding! I AM DESPERATE!
Did u ever get the ten reviews? I was locked out of my account, but I loved this story! please do the wedding! I AM DESPERATE!
5/10/2015 c16 Hiiiiiii
YOU HAVE TO POST THAT CHAOTER I'M GOING TO DIEE IF YOU DON'T YOU HEAR ME! AND ONE MORE THING... WOULDN'T THE RING TELL OPPONRNTS WHERE HINATA IS BY THE LIGHT REFLECTING OFF OF IT? ANYWAYS THANKS FOR READING MY S*HITTY REVIEW :)
YOU HAVE TO POST THAT CHAOTER I'M GOING TO DIEE IF YOU DON'T YOU HEAR ME! AND ONE MORE THING... WOULDN'T THE RING TELL OPPONRNTS WHERE HINATA IS BY THE LIGHT REFLECTING OFF OF IT? ANYWAYS THANKS FOR READING MY S*HITTY REVIEW :)
4/10/2015 c16 Violet-scar
Wow I just read this story in 2 hours and I absolutely loved it!
thank you for writing it :)
Wow I just read this story in 2 hours and I absolutely loved it!
thank you for writing it :)
3/15/2015 c1 Hinatta
Another long Hinata story!
I'll add this story to my Hinata Community
PM me to be staff or if you know of any others!
Look for it here: ...
fanfiction(.-com)/community/Strong-Hinata/119097/
Hinatta..
aa
Another long Hinata story!
I'll add this story to my Hinata Community
PM me to be staff or if you know of any others!
Look for it here: ...
fanfiction(.-com)/community/Strong-Hinata/119097/
Hinatta..
aa
12/11/2014 c16 Uzumaki Princess
WOW! I had so much fun reading this! it was as Sasuke would say "interesting" I mean it is 4 a.m in the morning so I hope you make an epilogue where Sasuke and Hinata get married and Hinata gets pregnant (it would be interesting to see Sasuke possessive and protective of his wife and unborn child) especially when on missions of course it would take a lot of convincing to have him allow Hinata to receive any mission that isn't D or C ranked anyway thanks for the story, I enjoyed it :)
WOW! I had so much fun reading this! it was as Sasuke would say "interesting" I mean it is 4 a.m in the morning so I hope you make an epilogue where Sasuke and Hinata get married and Hinata gets pregnant (it would be interesting to see Sasuke possessive and protective of his wife and unborn child) especially when on missions of course it would take a lot of convincing to have him allow Hinata to receive any mission that isn't D or C ranked anyway thanks for the story, I enjoyed it :)
9/23/2014 c5 reneelg1963
I have truly enjoyed reading this story...when do you plan to to update? we are all waiting in anticipation...please update soon...
I have truly enjoyed reading this story...when do you plan to to update? we are all waiting in anticipation...please update soon...
9/11/2014 c16 Guest
EPILOGUE PLEASE
EPILOGUE PLEASE