12/26/2014 c2 Guest
It's not crappy, you should keep going! Maybe you could go into how they got there a little more. Also don't doubt yourself as much, it's not as bad as you think. Put some effort into it and it could be great! Continue it! You have 18 people following it and you've only written two 'crappy' chapters. It's a great idea and it could be great!

7/29/2014 c1 Ode to a Fangirl
Awesome start!

1/21/2014 c2 Guest
update update update

11/6/2013 c1 red719
I loved it :D

10/25/2013 c2 31AirFireWaterEarth
Ya better update soon.

10/11/2013 c1 PoeticSnowflake
Cute ending! I like the land of ozish line.

9/8/2013 c2 bookworm
UPDATE IT HAS BEEN MORE THAN A MONTH!