for The Lost Child9/9/2014 c87 Guest
Please continue! Love it!
Please continue! Love it!
9/8/2014 c87 Guest
Praise of others delivered. :) I love this story! You do a good job of balancing characters and not focusing on any single one too much. And Olivia is such a sweet mom!
Praise of others delivered. :) I love this story! You do a good job of balancing characters and not focusing on any single one too much. And Olivia is such a sweet mom!
9/8/2014 c87 iheartsvu93
So I have read all of this in about 2 days (on top of Sims play and mounds of homework). I'm pretty pleased with myself, I gotta say. I'm also pretty pleased with this story, I haven't read SVU fan fic in a while and I'm usually turned off by a lot of short chapter but you have managed to keep my attention so don't let go of it and update as soon as possible please. Well Done.
So I have read all of this in about 2 days (on top of Sims play and mounds of homework). I'm pretty pleased with myself, I gotta say. I'm also pretty pleased with this story, I haven't read SVU fan fic in a while and I'm usually turned off by a lot of short chapter but you have managed to keep my attention so don't let go of it and update as soon as possible please. Well Done.
9/8/2014 c87 
4VampWolf Girl 4Ever
wow, i lauged when Oliva started ratteling the bars, that was a good bit of humor in a bad situation, im wondering if you will add Amaro and the other chik (sorry i forgot her name) to the squad
whats erins kids name?
4VampWolf Girl 4Everwow, i lauged when Oliva started ratteling the bars, that was a good bit of humor in a bad situation, im wondering if you will add Amaro and the other chik (sorry i forgot her name) to the squad
whats erins kids name?
9/8/2014 c87 Guest
Great chapter as usual
Great chapter as usual
9/7/2014 c86 Guest
Amazing!
Amazing!
9/6/2014 c86 Tkc81
I found your fanfic by accident about three days ago since then I've not been able to stop reading it I love it! The way you were tell stories is actually awesome I need to keep going I'm pretty much addicted now. I normally don't like fanfic very much it's very off-the-wall and random things happen. But your stories are very consistent and I can see them playing out in my mind . It's almost like watching a real episode of SVU on TV you're very good at what you're doing. I waited to the very end of the chapter 86 todo any review I think you should keep going back now I can't stop reading it...
The store is a very consistent I love the fact that I it was funny and some points in very shocking in others it is a great story you are very talented at writing... Please email me if you don't mind whenever you do an update I will be waiting for update! :)
The part where she gets sent to the home for night and she does the master scheme or plan I forget all my Omg I was cracking up reading that part.. I love the parts of the story of it's just about Hannah and Olivia unlike the show I wish Olivia had more of a personal life children or something and your story brings it out keep up the GREAT work!
And please email me with updates :) i'll be waiting
I found your fanfic by accident about three days ago since then I've not been able to stop reading it I love it! The way you were tell stories is actually awesome I need to keep going I'm pretty much addicted now. I normally don't like fanfic very much it's very off-the-wall and random things happen. But your stories are very consistent and I can see them playing out in my mind . It's almost like watching a real episode of SVU on TV you're very good at what you're doing. I waited to the very end of the chapter 86 todo any review I think you should keep going back now I can't stop reading it...
The store is a very consistent I love the fact that I it was funny and some points in very shocking in others it is a great story you are very talented at writing... Please email me if you don't mind whenever you do an update I will be waiting for update! :)
The part where she gets sent to the home for night and she does the master scheme or plan I forget all my Omg I was cracking up reading that part.. I love the parts of the story of it's just about Hannah and Olivia unlike the show I wish Olivia had more of a personal life children or something and your story brings it out keep up the GREAT work!
And please email me with updates :) i'll be waiting
9/6/2014 c86 Guest
:) so happy to see updates! I want more! MORE! Moooooooorrrrreeeee, I say!
:) so happy to see updates! I want more! MORE! Moooooooorrrrreeeee, I say!
9/5/2014 c86 JoCupcake
Hannah is a genius! Hope they find Erin before it's to late and joe gets let go!
Hannah is a genius! Hope they find Erin before it's to late and joe gets let go!
9/5/2014 c86 Guest
Awesome
Awesome
9/5/2014 c86 Guest
Obstruction and criminal conspiracy my a$$...Miklaya had a gun. It was a good shooting. IAB is trying to make something seem like it didn't happen that way...
Obstruction and criminal conspiracy my a$$...Miklaya had a gun. It was a good shooting. IAB is trying to make something seem like it didn't happen that way...
9/3/2014 c85 rebeccak2009
whoops I thought I was logged in, so here's my review, again:
Tucker is a real a$$ as usual...
but why are Liv and Hannah in a holding cell? This is IAB we're dealing with, not a precinct.
how old is Hannah here? I thought at a certain age, someone can be questioned w/o parental consent or a parent being present, even if they're under 18 (maybe I'm remembering how teenage suspects were being treated wrong)
whoops I thought I was logged in, so here's my review, again:
Tucker is a real a$$ as usual...
but why are Liv and Hannah in a holding cell? This is IAB we're dealing with, not a precinct.
how old is Hannah here? I thought at a certain age, someone can be questioned w/o parental consent or a parent being present, even if they're under 18 (maybe I'm remembering how teenage suspects were being treated wrong)