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7/14/2022 c108 16justanotherbookworm78
I figured after everything that happened, Olivia would show up worried. Glad Hannah wasn't seriously hurt, even if she didn't want Olivia to arrest Devon, I get why it needed to be done. I can tell Elliot still isn't Hannah's favorite person right now, or maybe its more a matter of the fact that she isn't her own favorite person. Wondering why she was calling CPS, probably trying to help Devon. Definitely want to find out more about how this story continues.
7/14/2022 c108 spacekitten2700
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7/14/2022 c108 Guest
I’m so glad you’re continuing this story! Thank you!
7/14/2022 c108 Renekeana123
I just recently started re-reading this story. I forgot how much I love the bond between Hannah and the team. I’m anticipating the next chapter to learn more about Devon and Hannah’s relationship. Keep up the great work, see you next chapter.
7/12/2022 c107 spacekitten2700
dang
7/12/2022 c107 justanotherbookworm78
I don't blame Elliot, Olivia, and Cragen for not trusting Malik, though it does seem like his intentions for Hannah aren't malicious and he is genuinely happy she got out. Speaking of Hannah, it must have been odd for her being back at the shelter where everything was so familiar but at the same time so foreign. It's unfortunate that everyone can only remember the trouble maker she used to be and not how much she has changed and grown over the years. Granted, she's only there because she got in trouble now, but they haven't acknowledged the fact that she's getting older. The encounter with Devon is scary, and I wonder why Hannah didn't want the cops called. Was it because she didn't want to be labeled a 'snitch' as Devon referred to her as, or because she didn't want more trouble brought down on herself? I also think perhaps she didn't want Olivia to find out what had happened, too.
7/11/2022 c106 spacekitten2700
missed reading like to read more
7/11/2022 c106 justanotherbookworm78
Love how Olivia just knows instinctively when Hannah is up to something. Though, it wasn't as bad as it seemed, even if the teen has missed too many classes and need to get back into her extra curricular activities by having Olivia talk to the head mistress. Enjoyed the mother/daughter moments, and hope that everything is okay with Victoria and her boyfriend, that bit of information was concerning, I can understand why Olivia was worried. Hope to see some Elliot/Hannah moments soon.
7/11/2022 c106 2YoGirlAL
Still here reading eeeep! Love this fic & always loved the character of Hannah and the portrayal of her & Olivia’s relationship! Hope to see more of it soon :)
7/11/2022 c106 Guest
Loving this story. Forgot how good it was. So glad you’re continuing this!
7/10/2022 c105 Guest
I read this story first agesss ago and the other day I just happened to stumble on it again, imagine my surprise when I realised it had been updated! Thank you so much for finishing it, it will forever be one of my favs
7/10/2022 c105 16justanotherbookworm78
I feel for Hannah. For all her bravado, she's very much like every other teenager, trying to figure out where she fits in. But that's where the similarities end, as the life Hannah has lived give her so much more to deal with. She has the street smarts, the book smarts, and as Olivia pointed out, can belong anywhere she chooses, but it makes me sad to see there is still a part of her that is longing for the mother she never knew. I know Olivia will do whatever she can to track down the woman who gave birth to Hannah, so that the teen can hopefully get the answers to the questions she's had for so long.
7/10/2022 c104 Guest
So glad you finished this story and are sharing it. I’ve always loved this story and wanted to see how it ended.
7/10/2022 c104 Guest
I'm still reading! I found the story maybe only a few months ago but I was hoping it would be finished. This story is so sweet, I love Hannah and her relationship with everyone.
7/10/2022 c104 8CeilingFanCumberbatch
Oh my goodness! I got so excited when I saw the notification that you posted a chapter! I am still reading and I can’t wait for more chapters. :)
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