
5/8/2014 c14 Lotti Jmnz
What happend next?
What happend next?
4/20/2014 c13 yessiec
I liked this chapter, but the grammar needs a lot of work. Please split the story into paragraphs.
I liked this chapter, but the grammar needs a lot of work. Please split the story into paragraphs.
4/6/2014 c1 Stop
STOP WRITING. Please. Unless this is a joke, I greatly urge you to put down the pen, and give up your far off dreams of becoming an author.
With love,
A.L.
STOP WRITING. Please. Unless this is a joke, I greatly urge you to put down the pen, and give up your far off dreams of becoming an author.
With love,
A.L.
4/4/2014 c12 Yessiec
I liked this chapter. The grammar needs some work though. I am looking forward to more
I liked this chapter. The grammar needs some work though. I am looking forward to more
2/24/2014 c11 Guest
Nicely written chapter. I am looking forward to seeing where you go from here. Melody's reaction to Mitchie's book being in her dad cabin will be interesting.
More please.
Nicely written chapter. I am looking forward to seeing where you go from here. Melody's reaction to Mitchie's book being in her dad cabin will be interesting.
More please.