
2/16/2014 c10 Kewikiana1999
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I loved it.
You are an awesome writer. :)
Hope to read more soon.
333,33333333333
I loved it.
You are an awesome writer. :)
Hope to read more soon.
2/15/2014 c10 Guest
Nice work. I hope Melody talks to Shane soon. More please.
Nice work. I hope Melody talks to Shane soon. More please.
2/15/2014 c10
4Skyscraper15
Love the chapter, Poor Melody still in the dark. Peter and Mels as sweethearts, nice. I like him, he didn't take up Tess's personality unlike Odette, can't wait to find out what she has got planned for Melody. Update soon please.

Love the chapter, Poor Melody still in the dark. Peter and Mels as sweethearts, nice. I like him, he didn't take up Tess's personality unlike Odette, can't wait to find out what she has got planned for Melody. Update soon please.
2/9/2014 c9 Skyscraper15
Oh my God, so good, can't wait for Melody to know Mitchie as her mother. Update soon please.
Oh my God, so good, can't wait for Melody to know Mitchie as her mother. Update soon please.
2/9/2014 c9 Guest
well written. I hope that Mitchie can be mom to Melody now. More please
well written. I hope that Mitchie can be mom to Melody now. More please
1/23/2014 c7 Skyscraper15
That is so like Tess, making her children bear her name, oh well like this chapter, UPDATE SOON please.
That is so like Tess, making her children bear her name, oh well like this chapter, UPDATE SOON please.
1/2/2014 c6
4Skyscraper15
I am, so Tess had two children, who is the Father and why is Peter's last name Tyler and not his Father's? Please update soon.

I am, so Tess had two children, who is the Father and why is Peter's last name Tyler and not his Father's? Please update soon.