8/18/2013 c1 7i-am-casass
Great start to the story, it looks like it will turn out really good

8/17/2013 c1 2semper paratis
This is a really great start. I can't wait to read more! I really like the changes you've made in the canon relationships. It makes for much more interesting reading.

8/17/2013 c1 25917brat
wow this is good and I am curious...i'm not sure why but why am I getting the feeling Jame nore LIly where her parents and adopted her or something? I mena I think creature was calling her mudblod...am I right? Oh please keep this up because I can't wait to see what your going to have happen.

8/17/2013 c1 freethewolves1
cool story so far. i really hope you update it soon

8/16/2013 c1 1ptl4ever419
I love it, and really can't wait for more :)