
5/8/2017 c6 Charles Gorman
Absolutely flawless.
Absolutely flawless.
5/8/2017 c5 Charles Gorman
Great chapter.
Great chapter.
5/8/2017 c4 Charles Gorman
Outstanding job buudy. You captured Spider-man's character flawlessly.
Outstanding job buudy. You captured Spider-man's character flawlessly.
5/8/2017 c3 Charles Gorman
Really, really good chapter. I loved how you were able to make Peter and May closer to the spies' families.
Really, really good chapter. I loved how you were able to make Peter and May closer to the spies' families.
5/8/2017 c2 Charles Gorman
I loved your approach on how Peter and the girls first met. However, as for the love triangle thing, I'm not sure as to how Sam has developed a romantic interest in Peter. Clover is a no brainer because she is boy crazy. I'm also surprised you didn't try to make Alex a potential love interest for Peter. Other than that great chapter.
I loved your approach on how Peter and the girls first met. However, as for the love triangle thing, I'm not sure as to how Sam has developed a romantic interest in Peter. Clover is a no brainer because she is boy crazy. I'm also surprised you didn't try to make Alex a potential love interest for Peter. Other than that great chapter.
5/8/2017 c1 Charles Gorman
Great stuff. Keep up the good work.
Great stuff. Keep up the good work.
4/16/2017 c1 Guest
... I didn't expect this to work. Pleasantly surprised.
... I didn't expect this to work. Pleasantly surprised.
2/23/2017 c8 Guest
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON
12/19/2016 c8
1MarcvsVipsanivsAgrippa
Interesting premise. Sub-par writing rife with grammatical errors and awkward dialogue and characterization. Wastes too much time on addressing circle jerk reviews and this utterly pointless mystery judge thing. A shame; this could have been good.

Interesting premise. Sub-par writing rife with grammatical errors and awkward dialogue and characterization. Wastes too much time on addressing circle jerk reviews and this utterly pointless mystery judge thing. A shame; this could have been good.
11/23/2016 c8
23levelxtremedude
You've peeked my interest when you do return I hope to see more. Either than that solid work you got here keep it up.

You've peeked my interest when you do return I hope to see more. Either than that solid work you got here keep it up.