8/23/2013 c1 Oh-No-Not-You
I can't wait till you update so please update done, also I don't think you are a bad writer, there are people that write their stories text style, and some that rush into things. But you didn't, again can't wait till you update.
Thx the :D

8/20/2013 c1 4Thi Lou
You shall see who she is :)