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4/13/2015 c14 9Love.Fiction.2022
Loved it!:D
4/13/2015 c13 Love.Fiction.2022
Very good! :)
4/13/2015 c12 Love.Fiction.2022
loving it. How long will this story be? Like how many chapters will it have by the way?
4/13/2015 c11 Love.Fiction.2022
Great chappie.
4/13/2015 c10 Love.Fiction.2022
loved it. Loved the interaction between Demetri and Beth, they can't have a normal conversation without arguing can they...
4/12/2015 c9 Love.Fiction.2022
Loved it! :D
4/12/2015 c8 Love.Fiction.2022
THAT'S IT! YOU NEED TO BRING DEMETRI AND BETH TOGETHER, EVEN JANE KNOWS THAT THEY ARE ATTRACTED BUT OBIVOUSLY DON'T KNOW.
4/12/2015 c7 Love.Fiction.2022
"My memory's just fine thanks. Stop gawping at my boobs." That my favourite line lol.
4/12/2015 c6 Love.Fiction.2022
This is good.
4/12/2015 c5 Love.Fiction.2022
Loved it. NOOOO Please don't have a relarionship between Beth and Marcus it just wouldn't fit.
4/12/2015 c4 Love.Fiction.2022
Looking good.
4/12/2015 c3 Love.Fiction.2022
Loving it! Aro made a surprise visit lol.
4/12/2015 c2 Love.Fiction.2022
Loving this!
4/12/2015 c1 Love.Fiction.2022
Great start! With my favourite characters;)
4/10/2015 c22 Madamexx
Yay! I’m always so happy when you update.

I think you did an excellent job with the Jacob and the other shifters as well as the Cullens. It’s funny, you captured them all so well. I found I detested Edward just like in the movie, and I don’t think you were really trying to make him detestable. The way he blatantly read Beth’s mind and just announces to everyone what she’s thinking – I think is rude. At least Aro has to take your hand first and he usually asks permission (unless you’re being tried in his court). But realize when I say this, I don’t like Edward, so I would probably hate him no matter what. lol

Of course, Beth handled herself well. I’m definitely curious to see what you have in mind. So far Beth seems pretty happy with her choices, but I wonder if she will always think like that. :DDD
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