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4/9/2015 c22 6Shilara
Loved it and yes! Though I'd love more Cullen interaction too!
3/27/2015 c21 Madamexx
Cliffy! You better update soon, grrr. lolol

“The saccharine-ice smell of vampire was everywhere.” What a cool way to put it. I always think you have a great way with words.

Excellent chapter as always. I find this chapter fascinating because it shows an Englishwoman’s view of Washington, which of course is wildly different than someone like me who just looks at it as another State. I think you did a really cool job of showing that Anna was still with her in spirit. And I hope the Cullens show up soon before the pack decides to jump Beth.

Final thing, because of the title, I have “Englishman in New York” running through my head. Lol
That’s okay though, I love Sting.
3/14/2015 c20 Madamexx
Yay! I was so excited to see you updated, I had to read this right away before I went to work, yesterday. I’m sorry I didn’t review until today.

That was nice how everybody remembered Beth’s birthday. It seems the Volturi are now starting to consider her as one of their own. I think Beth will miss them.

So now Beth is starting out on her adventure to meet the Cullens. I loved how you had Demetri drive her to the airport. I get the feeling Beth will try to remain hidden at first when she finds them. Alice is waiting for her though, and of course, Edward can read her mind.

Great chapter, I’m looking forward to the next. :D
2/27/2015 c19 2Mistra Rose
If only she knew...Poor Beth ;)
2/26/2015 c19 Madamexx
Yay! I loved this chapter. I’m so happy you’re slowly bringing Beth and Demetri together. I’m also very intrigued about what will happen when Beth meets the Cullens. Will Demetri go with her? I can’t imagine Aro telling Demetri no, but then again, I always feel like Aro has a different agenda. Although right now he’s just trying to romance Anna. Lol

I think in some ways it will be good for Beth to get away from Anna. While I know she has good intentions, it always feels like Anna patronizes Beth a little, and you know that would get old after a while. Beth is so candid, she’s likely to snap at her. By leaving, this gives Beth a chance to get out on her own, see the world and stand on her own feet. I betcha though, Anna will miss Beth more than she realizes.
2/6/2015 c18 Madamexx
Yay, another chapter!

The way you present this, it looks like Marcus was actually trying to do Beth a favor by pushing her to leave. Something he tried to do centuries ago and didn’t make it. It makes me wonder if Marcus would be happier with the Cullens. Lol

So if Beth goes to see the Cullens, is Demetri going to follow her? :DDD
Please update soon. lol
2/6/2015 c18 Mistra Rose
Marcus wasn't very nice at all but I can't wait to see what will happen. please don't leave me hanging to long.
1/28/2015 c17 Madamexx
Yay! I’m so happy to see an update. I think you do a lovely job portraying Athenodora with her beautiful gowns and her rather candid questions. I’m really looking forward to seeing Beth go find the Cullens. I wonder now will Demetri follow her. I also wonder what Aro thinks about all this. Right now he seems kind of mysterious. lol
1/16/2015 c16 Anon
Nope, still don't like it. Marcus needs love too. Demetri is a douche.
1/14/2015 c16 Mistra Rose
More please and I do hope that Beth does get through to Marcus some more and lightin up his mood more like she did before.
1/14/2015 c16 Madamexx
Anna’s so sweet, having this talk with Beth. You really do an excellent job of showing how much the sisters care for each other. I know now that if Beth leaves to meet the Cullens, she wouldn’t stay because she’d miss Anna too much. Also I think she’d also be bored death, but that could be just me. Lol

So what is going on with Marcus? Is he starving himself? This doesn’t sound good. :(

And yes, Anna and Aro are a sweet couple.
1/9/2015 c15 Mistra Rose
I think that Beth and Demetri make a cute couple and I can't wait to see what relationship Marcus has with her, but I can see it being a father and daughter one. Can't wait for more
1/2/2015 c15 Madamexx
Oh wow, this is an interesting twist. Just when I thought Beth was halfway out the door, Anna manages to convince her to stay. I wasn't expecting that at all. Now I have no idea what you have planned. lol

While I'm delighted at the idea of Demetri and Beth finally maybe seeing things eye to eye, I want to say, don't feel you have to change the story because of me. I have every faith in you that you will take this story in the right direction. :D
1/2/2015 c15 Jane
:( That kinds kills it for me. It makes previous interactions with Marcus and Beth seem strange and irrelevant.
1/2/2015 c15 CeliaSingsSongs
What Beth and Marcus would be so cute! NOOOOOO! I like Demetri lots but Marcus really needs some loving, seriously ASAP.
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