
10/3/2013 c1 Guest
Your story is stupid. Vampires. Really?
Your story is stupid. Vampires. Really?
9/30/2013 c7 Guest
Derp
Derp
9/30/2013 c7 knightphoenix2
AT LAST! The Battle of Hong Kong Bay! Good save on the Kaidanovskys', but please tell me that someone saved the Wei triplets, too!
Hmmm, so the problem you're concentrating on is how to get Striker Eureka back since all of its digital circuits got fried. Wonder if there's a *techno* wizard about to appear?
Anyway, keep up the great work!
AT LAST! The Battle of Hong Kong Bay! Good save on the Kaidanovskys', but please tell me that someone saved the Wei triplets, too!
Hmmm, so the problem you're concentrating on is how to get Striker Eureka back since all of its digital circuits got fried. Wonder if there's a *techno* wizard about to appear?
Anyway, keep up the great work!
9/22/2013 c6 knightphoenix2
I am looking forward to the next chapter! Especially to see the "Big Damn Heroes" moment set-up.
Preferably, *without* any "human sacrifices"!
Please explain why Chuck is getting off so lightly, though. I would like to think Raleigh is because Pentecost realizes he wronged Raleigh several years ago, and is trying to set things right. Especially if Pentecost is ... ill ...
Keep up the great work, please!
I am looking forward to the next chapter! Especially to see the "Big Damn Heroes" moment set-up.
Preferably, *without* any "human sacrifices"!
Please explain why Chuck is getting off so lightly, though. I would like to think Raleigh is because Pentecost realizes he wronged Raleigh several years ago, and is trying to set things right. Especially if Pentecost is ... ill ...
Keep up the great work, please!
9/17/2013 c5 knightphoenix2
Great story here!
I googled "bakeneko", and I can see where Raleigh might have a few ... problems, with his new partner. Particularly in the way she might have become Mako ...
Yet, it seems that Raleigh has been part of the supernatural PPDC for a long time, considering who his trianers were. I would love to get more info on them!
And, I simply love having a vampire superhero on the staff!
Please, keep up this rocking great story!
Great story here!
I googled "bakeneko", and I can see where Raleigh might have a few ... problems, with his new partner. Particularly in the way she might have become Mako ...
Yet, it seems that Raleigh has been part of the supernatural PPDC for a long time, considering who his trianers were. I would love to get more info on them!
And, I simply love having a vampire superhero on the staff!
Please, keep up this rocking great story!
9/16/2013 c5
28Ms.Redrum
Happy belated birthday! lol
This chapter was awsome sauce! Keep up the good writting.

Happy belated birthday! lol
This chapter was awsome sauce! Keep up the good writting.
9/15/2013 c4 Emma
Can I just say that I am loving this story? Of course, I love anything to do with the supernatural, but I absolutely love the world you've created here. Just, I'm really inarticulate right now, but later on I'll leave a better review, one where I'm not tripping over my words.
Can I just say that I am loving this story? Of course, I love anything to do with the supernatural, but I absolutely love the world you've created here. Just, I'm really inarticulate right now, but later on I'll leave a better review, one where I'm not tripping over my words.
9/7/2013 c4 knightphoenix2
Nice work! So, Stacker and Mako are Hunters as well?
Yet, Raleigh is able to handle himself quite well against the other Hunters? Even though he's been ... *out of practice* ... for over five years?! What's going on, here?
And Stacker explicitly *orders* Newt NOT to Drift with a Kaiju brain. Does he know something (or, a LOT of things) that his science team doesn't? If so, how?
And, I have no problem with saving all the Rangers! I would like the other Ranger teams to see just *why* Stacker brought Raleigh in. We'll need Stacker to *see* his victory, and to help rebuild the world after the Breach is sealed. And besides, there can't be too many people trying to reform Chuck, can there?
Keep up the great work!
Nice work! So, Stacker and Mako are Hunters as well?
Yet, Raleigh is able to handle himself quite well against the other Hunters? Even though he's been ... *out of practice* ... for over five years?! What's going on, here?
And Stacker explicitly *orders* Newt NOT to Drift with a Kaiju brain. Does he know something (or, a LOT of things) that his science team doesn't? If so, how?
And, I have no problem with saving all the Rangers! I would like the other Ranger teams to see just *why* Stacker brought Raleigh in. We'll need Stacker to *see* his victory, and to help rebuild the world after the Breach is sealed. And besides, there can't be too many people trying to reform Chuck, can there?
Keep up the great work!
9/2/2013 c3
1Alienea
yaaaaaaaaayyyyyy more of the story! Also Raleigh's reaction was great, especially with waiting and then going to get information from the science division

yaaaaaaaaayyyyyy more of the story! Also Raleigh's reaction was great, especially with waiting and then going to get information from the science division
9/2/2013 c3 knightphoenix2
Great story!
I like the fact that the "United Nations" of the PPDC are now including different types of ... *" Humanity"*, who have decided to step up and help regular humans, like Raleigh and Mako, get the job done.
Finally, I say, "Save EVERYONE, especially Pentecost, the Kaidanovskys, the Weis, and Yancy. Maybe the mermaids could show up in time to help at the Battles of Hong Kong Harbor, and the Breach.
Keep up the great work!
Great story!
I like the fact that the "United Nations" of the PPDC are now including different types of ... *" Humanity"*, who have decided to step up and help regular humans, like Raleigh and Mako, get the job done.
Finally, I say, "Save EVERYONE, especially Pentecost, the Kaidanovskys, the Weis, and Yancy. Maybe the mermaids could show up in time to help at the Battles of Hong Kong Harbor, and the Breach.
Keep up the great work!
9/1/2013 c3
3LunaDragonPoet
i really like this take on the fandom. and you really seem to weave them together in a way that carries true to the reader. really loving this.

i really like this take on the fandom. and you really seem to weave them together in a way that carries true to the reader. really loving this.
8/30/2013 c2
28Ms.Redrum
i have been waiting... so very long since the movie came out, for someone to start a supernatural fic... i cannot wait to read more.

i have been waiting... so very long since the movie came out, for someone to start a supernatural fic... i cannot wait to read more.
8/26/2013 c2
20ArmoredSoul
I really like how you're building the world, showing how all the different 'monsters' and people all mingle together and how they all function on a day to day basis. Though I'm not entirely sure what you mean by 'vegetarian' vampires, it's an interesting concept and introduces a dynamic between the various sects that makes things even more intriguing.
I greatly look forward to the next installment, and if you never need any help, someone to bounce ideas off of or to check spelling/grammar, I'd be happy to help out. :)

I really like how you're building the world, showing how all the different 'monsters' and people all mingle together and how they all function on a day to day basis. Though I'm not entirely sure what you mean by 'vegetarian' vampires, it's an interesting concept and introduces a dynamic between the various sects that makes things even more intriguing.
I greatly look forward to the next installment, and if you never need any help, someone to bounce ideas off of or to check spelling/grammar, I'd be happy to help out. :)
8/18/2013 c1 Harri
A Totally great, looking forward to reading more.
A Totally great, looking forward to reading more.