
10/24/2013 c1 ms. cheerful
this a fun story! little Vicki sounds so cute! i hope youll get enough reviews continue the story.
this a fun story! little Vicki sounds so cute! i hope youll get enough reviews continue the story.
10/24/2013 c3 ms. cheerful
i know everyone is asking theh same thing, but who's the mom?
i know everyone is asking theh same thing, but who's the mom?
10/11/2013 c2
11MaryMusic2
hello
your story is beautiful
but i have a question
that roy was not with riza if not with his sister
bye

hello
your story is beautiful
but i have a question
that roy was not with riza if not with his sister
bye
9/30/2013 c1 Oxiko Namikaze
Wonderful story))))))
Please, Update soon!
Wonderful story))))))
Please, Update soon!
8/19/2013 c1 accountkiller0123
Dude, I was reading this to my friend and i just about died. I absolutely looooooooooovvvvveee this! amazing work. you are great at writing and i feel jealous cuz i suck. you need to totally write the rest or i will explode.
Q:
WHO IS THE MOTHER ODINOLSDUBGISUDHGILSUDNFG IM DYING
Dude, I was reading this to my friend and i just about died. I absolutely looooooooooovvvvveee this! amazing work. you are great at writing and i feel jealous cuz i suck. you need to totally write the rest or i will explode.
Q:
WHO IS THE MOTHER ODINOLSDUBGISUDHGILSUDNFG IM DYING
8/19/2013 c1 Jessie
Awww. Update soon!
Awww. Update soon!