
7/17/2014 c1
42SnowWhite0716
I am so drawn to this story you have no idea! The imagery and personification is stunning! Please update soon!
Favorite Disney movie? I'd have to say Tarzan :)

I am so drawn to this story you have no idea! The imagery and personification is stunning! Please update soon!
Favorite Disney movie? I'd have to say Tarzan :)
9/8/2013 c1
21ChildOfWisdom
This is amazing!
I can't wait for the second chapter!
My favorite Disney movie (Out of all of them, because I'm one of those Disney movie lovers) has to be: "The Little Mermaid". I've had Under The Sea, Part Of Your World and Kiss The Girl stuck in my head for the longest time now, lol!
Can't wait for the second chapter!
Update soon.

This is amazing!
I can't wait for the second chapter!
My favorite Disney movie (Out of all of them, because I'm one of those Disney movie lovers) has to be: "The Little Mermaid". I've had Under The Sea, Part Of Your World and Kiss The Girl stuck in my head for the longest time now, lol!
Can't wait for the second chapter!
Update soon.
8/22/2013 c1
1Docaan
Mmmm The little mermaid, lilo & stich, tangled or the one from kim possible...cant choose only one. I loved this chapter, it really hooked me up and im dying for the next chapter to come(:

Mmmm The little mermaid, lilo & stich, tangled or the one from kim possible...cant choose only one. I loved this chapter, it really hooked me up and im dying for the next chapter to come(:
8/20/2013 c1 Guest
I love you! Sounds like an interesting story and its not filled with spelling and grammar errors like so many other stories. I haven't found many good fics but when I found this I almost cried! It was my FINALLY moment.
I love you! Sounds like an interesting story and its not filled with spelling and grammar errors like so many other stories. I haven't found many good fics but when I found this I almost cried! It was my FINALLY moment.
8/19/2013 c1
13Suneater
I thinly this is going to be an amazing story. I like your style and you've done a good job keeping them IC. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
My favorite Disney movie has to be Atlantis, not one the most well liked but I love it.

I thinly this is going to be an amazing story. I like your style and you've done a good job keeping them IC. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
My favorite Disney movie has to be Atlantis, not one the most well liked but I love it.
8/19/2013 c1 Lana
Great new story idea. Update soon.
Great new story idea. Update soon.
8/19/2013 c1 Jessie Daughter of the Sun
Ok, why are your stories always so amazing? Share your writing skills, I need some. I'm in love with this story, and it's only the first chapter. Everything about this chapter, the beginning part, the running, the part on the bus and at school, it's all so good.
And wtf you watched ONE Disney movie? None of the Princess ones? Not Lion King or Finding Nemo? (Those two are my favorites)
Ok, why are your stories always so amazing? Share your writing skills, I need some. I'm in love with this story, and it's only the first chapter. Everything about this chapter, the beginning part, the running, the part on the bus and at school, it's all so good.
And wtf you watched ONE Disney movie? None of the Princess ones? Not Lion King or Finding Nemo? (Those two are my favorites)
8/19/2013 c1
9connorstoll
Okay, this is new and I instantly fell in love with it. Seriously, I'm addicted to it. This is fantastic, oh my gosh, everything was hypnotic, everything was written so well and you clearly left a good impression on me. The plot is new, the plot is clean and I cannot wait for this. Really, this was amazing, I LOVE IT. I patiently (not) wait for the next chapter! :)
Oh, and favourite Disney movie...I'm a sucker for Disney Princess movies; so Beauty and The Beast is my favourite. But, Lion King, Little Mermaid, all of that...they are all wonderful:) I seriously can't believe you only watched that one Disney Movie! You have not live until you watch the Lion King.

Okay, this is new and I instantly fell in love with it. Seriously, I'm addicted to it. This is fantastic, oh my gosh, everything was hypnotic, everything was written so well and you clearly left a good impression on me. The plot is new, the plot is clean and I cannot wait for this. Really, this was amazing, I LOVE IT. I patiently (not) wait for the next chapter! :)
Oh, and favourite Disney movie...I'm a sucker for Disney Princess movies; so Beauty and The Beast is my favourite. But, Lion King, Little Mermaid, all of that...they are all wonderful:) I seriously can't believe you only watched that one Disney Movie! You have not live until you watch the Lion King.
8/19/2013 c1
14Runner of Sorts
Favorite Disney movie... Oh, I don't know actually. I've begun to dislike some of them after watching them with my family. (Almost all of my cousins and all my siblings are younger.) So far, I really like Brave. :) Merida, the protagonist, was just fine without a man. And she proved it! Okay, let me say—WRITE! This is really good! I want to see how percy takes down the twins. ;) And I want to see what happened to Percy and who did "that" to Annabeth. I may be wrong on my theory, but I have a pretty good feeling. Well, bad if its correct, but, at the same time, good. Update ASAP!

Favorite Disney movie... Oh, I don't know actually. I've begun to dislike some of them after watching them with my family. (Almost all of my cousins and all my siblings are younger.) So far, I really like Brave. :) Merida, the protagonist, was just fine without a man. And she proved it! Okay, let me say—WRITE! This is really good! I want to see how percy takes down the twins. ;) And I want to see what happened to Percy and who did "that" to Annabeth. I may be wrong on my theory, but I have a pretty good feeling. Well, bad if its correct, but, at the same time, good. Update ASAP!
8/19/2013 c1 Emily
I like Finding Nemo. It's been my favorite since I was 3 and I saw it at my friend's house. Great chapter, you're a really good writer. I love all the descriptions
I like Finding Nemo. It's been my favorite since I was 3 and I saw it at my friend's house. Great chapter, you're a really good writer. I love all the descriptions