
3/23/2017 c24
2Shunakoo25
I wish that at least make a happy ending where NaruxMai get together. Too sad. But the story is A okay!

I wish that at least make a happy ending where NaruxMai get together. Too sad. But the story is A okay!
12/25/2015 c7 BasFUl
Did you come up with black rings around neck from z loan or by yourself
Did you come up with black rings around neck from z loan or by yourself
7/28/2015 c24
1AwkwardIdeasLeadToThis
I KNEW THIS STORY WOULD HAVE A SEQUEL BUT I DIDN'T LISTEN TO MYSELF. I'M SO ANGRY BUT AT THE SAME TIME I FUCKING HOPE ITS FINISHED OR AT LEAST NOT ABANDONED GOD I LOVE YOU

I KNEW THIS STORY WOULD HAVE A SEQUEL BUT I DIDN'T LISTEN TO MYSELF. I'M SO ANGRY BUT AT THE SAME TIME I FUCKING HOPE ITS FINISHED OR AT LEAST NOT ABANDONED GOD I LOVE YOU
1/2/2015 c1 Celestial
Holy shit. This was literally amazing. The plot is so good and I just loved it. It kept me wanting to read more. Not to mention I FREAKING CRIED while reading the last chapter when Ayako walked in to find a Mai-less apartment. Also the MINI HEART ATTACK I had when it said it was the last chapter and thought for a second that there wasn't a sequel. Dear god, my heart can't handle all this stress. No but seriously, this was a spectacular story and I loved it. I cant wait to read the sequel. Thank you for putting your writing talwnt towards this beautiful fanfiction.
Holy shit. This was literally amazing. The plot is so good and I just loved it. It kept me wanting to read more. Not to mention I FREAKING CRIED while reading the last chapter when Ayako walked in to find a Mai-less apartment. Also the MINI HEART ATTACK I had when it said it was the last chapter and thought for a second that there wasn't a sequel. Dear god, my heart can't handle all this stress. No but seriously, this was a spectacular story and I loved it. I cant wait to read the sequel. Thank you for putting your writing talwnt towards this beautiful fanfiction.
11/2/2014 c24 candi711
Wow I just finished your story and I have to say I absolutely loved it! It was so captivating that I could not stop, although it took me whole two days to finish... I'm a slow reader :) but being sick gave me the time. I loved it but it left me with a lot of questions, thats where the sequel comes in I hope. I really wish that midori and noir play a big part in it I loved them. I can't wait to read more of your writing :)
Wow I just finished your story and I have to say I absolutely loved it! It was so captivating that I could not stop, although it took me whole two days to finish... I'm a slow reader :) but being sick gave me the time. I loved it but it left me with a lot of questions, thats where the sequel comes in I hope. I really wish that midori and noir play a big part in it I loved them. I can't wait to read more of your writing :)
8/23/2014 c24
3Mellow Paranoia
Hon hon hon,I know what Vogel Im Käfig means :D (by unconventional means of course) also,I've been reading your story since it was first published and you've really come a long way,it makes me really happy,like a parent watching their child grow X' I wonder who those indigo eyes belong to...possibly a love rival for Naru?Fufufu...I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Hon hon hon,I know what Vogel Im Käfig means :D (by unconventional means of course) also,I've been reading your story since it was first published and you've really come a long way,it makes me really happy,like a parent watching their child grow X' I wonder who those indigo eyes belong to...possibly a love rival for Naru?Fufufu...I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
8/22/2014 c24
10AliceTheBrave
I can't wait for the sequel! I seriously love this story. It has a great plot and is satisfyingly eloquent. Truly, you have outdone yourself. I enjoyed it immensely, thank you for taking the time to write such an amazing story. Really. You, dear Author, are amazing.
P.s.
'Vogel Im Kafig' is such a fitting title! Props to you. ;D

I can't wait for the sequel! I seriously love this story. It has a great plot and is satisfyingly eloquent. Truly, you have outdone yourself. I enjoyed it immensely, thank you for taking the time to write such an amazing story. Really. You, dear Author, are amazing.
P.s.
'Vogel Im Kafig' is such a fitting title! Props to you. ;D
8/22/2014 c24
19Naruisawesome
Hehehe. Vogel Im Käfig means caged bird...or something along those lines. XD

Hehehe. Vogel Im Käfig means caged bird...or something along those lines. XD
8/20/2014 c23 slvrphoenx
i love this story can't wait for the sequel.
i love this story can't wait for the sequel.
8/19/2014 c23
68MzShellSan
Thats an epilogue. Seemed more like a cruel way to torture me *cries* Why you do this?!

Thats an epilogue. Seemed more like a cruel way to torture me *cries* Why you do this?!