for 1498/12/2018 c1 kewr69
This would make a great story if you had someone go back and fix your spelling and change words like witch to which and after words to afterwards
This would make a great story if you had someone go back and fix your spelling and change words like witch to which and after words to afterwards
11/17/2014 c2 FlashDevil
It's nice to see 1337 feature in it since he didn't get much credit and even though he was a non-canon Spartan, he deserved at least some recognition. Since is probably the only Spartan failures to still be a Spartan.
It's nice to see 1337 feature in it since he didn't get much credit and even though he was a non-canon Spartan, he deserved at least some recognition. Since is probably the only Spartan failures to still be a Spartan.
9/24/2014 c6 
8Shadow the Ranger
This seems rather interesting...although you should have someone look over the chapter first because I found some spelling errors, not enough to make it unreadable but just a piece of advice. Also you should slow down the story a bit and give more detail as to what people look like, what's going on, and to develope character, because all the chapters thus far seem way to rushed
8Shadow the RangerThis seems rather interesting...although you should have someone look over the chapter first because I found some spelling errors, not enough to make it unreadable but just a piece of advice. Also you should slow down the story a bit and give more detail as to what people look like, what's going on, and to develope character, because all the chapters thus far seem way to rushed
7/2/2014 c4 Guest
Some of your words are wrong completely while some others are outright offensive.
Some of your words are wrong completely while some others are outright offensive.
5/27/2014 c5 7jh831
just read till this chapter, i like it so far.
your last update was october 7, 2013. and its now may 27, 2014.
your A/N at the bottom said to expect bi-weekly updates and you would try and keep a schedule.
any plans to update soon, or it it going to be longer to wait for an update?
i want to add to follow story but i want to know you are going to update before i do anything.
7jh831just read till this chapter, i like it so far.
your last update was october 7, 2013. and its now may 27, 2014.
your A/N at the bottom said to expect bi-weekly updates and you would try and keep a schedule.
any plans to update soon, or it it going to be longer to wait for an update?
i want to add to follow story but i want to know you are going to update before i do anything.
5/23/2014 c5 Talon5Krrde
So, does Harry get Spartan training and then go back to Hogwarts? That could be fun...
So, does Harry get Spartan training and then go back to Hogwarts? That could be fun...
11/29/2013 c2 19magical fan18
Not bad of a chapter and fic, I enjoyed it. Could have fixed the grammar a bit though and the spelling of some words also.
19magical fan18Not bad of a chapter and fic, I enjoyed it. Could have fixed the grammar a bit though and the spelling of some words also.