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4/18/2019 c4 3WhiteElfElder
You put trannies instead of trainees...completely different things.
8/12/2018 c1 kewr69
This would make a great story if you had someone go back and fix your spelling and change words like witch to which and after words to afterwards
11/15/2016 c7 draco7347
love story cant wait for new chapters
1/13/2015 c4 4BROMBROS
Witch for which twice in this chapter.
11/17/2014 c2 FlashDevil
It's nice to see 1337 feature in it since he didn't get much credit and even though he was a non-canon Spartan, he deserved at least some recognition. Since is probably the only Spartan failures to still be a Spartan.
9/24/2014 c6 8Shadow the Ranger
This seems rather interesting...although you should have someone look over the chapter first because I found some spelling errors, not enough to make it unreadable but just a piece of advice. Also you should slow down the story a bit and give more detail as to what people look like, what's going on, and to develope character, because all the chapters thus far seem way to rushed
7/7/2014 c6 ibterismith50
Looking forward to your update. Thanks
7/2/2014 c6 Telron
this is an interesting and good story so far
7/2/2014 c4 6NightWithMoon
afterward trainees follow.
use the right word.
7/2/2014 c4 Guest
Some of your words are wrong completely while some others are outright offensive.
5/27/2014 c5 7jh831
just read till this chapter, i like it so far.
your last update was october 7, 2013. and its now may 27, 2014.
your A/N at the bottom said to expect bi-weekly updates and you would try and keep a schedule.
any plans to update soon, or it it going to be longer to wait for an update?
i want to add to follow story but i want to know you are going to update before i do anything.
5/23/2014 c5 Talon5Krrde
So, does Harry get Spartan training and then go back to Hogwarts? That could be fun...
12/21/2013 c5 kento son
Good chapter
11/29/2013 c2 19magical fan18
Not bad of a chapter and fic, I enjoyed it. Could have fixed the grammar a bit though and the spelling of some words also.
11/10/2013 c5 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon
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