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1/12/2014 c1 1Starlight Mura
Oh, wow! So many OCs here! It's amazing how you can control them easily. Whuew, I know that I could hardly be able to do that XD

Ah, the plot is very nice. It's also very gently written too.
I'd like to read the next chapter when it's updated :3

Sincerely,
Lost Cat
8/25/2013 c1 Delete-writer
SUGOI, SUGOI, SUGOI!
Amazing! Please update! (sorry for late review, I was so impatient to read this story, but... family you know T.T )
I like it too much!
See you ;D
8/23/2013 c1 32Princess Of Flames
This is awesome! You are a really talented writer! You have written my OC well and Rebecca is actually Toramaru's elder sister (same age as Angel) but younger then Naomi. If you want I can give her form to you as well.
But anyway, I can see that the wait was worth it and you did an amazing job!
please do update soon and if you want help dont hesitate to ask.
P.S can you make an Angel x Gouenji fic?
8/22/2013 c1 49Shiranai Atsune
Sweet! I love it! It's so cool!

Oh please continue!

This is so... wow!
8/22/2013 c1 34AyasumiMamera
That was awesome!
Be careful not to make Mamera too bright.
She's really shy.
But furthermore, you wrote her innocence perfectly.
I'm lookimg forward to the second chapter!
Lots of love!
xoxo
8/22/2013 c1 29Sakuchii
Great start for the story! At first I wondered whom Aiko was calling an old man, but it ended being up Occhan not Ossan XD. Oh, two pairs of indigo haired twins, this is bad! XD
You cannot avoid similarity when creating OC's. It only means that minds think a like!

Aiko: Hoo... I don't want to hear that from you. A person who makes to me create new nickname for a person every single time, just because you're too lazy to remember them.
Yukiko: Yeah, and a person who makes me yell at Onee-san just because she has lost her temper and is cursing and willing to kill someone.
Sakuchii: Oi oi, you two... Did you BOTH have to point at "The Uncried Tears" ... Unfair...
AxY: Life is!

*sweat drop* So, good luck on the story! I will be waiting for an update! deshii
8/22/2013 c1 1SapphireSpade
Sugoi sugoi! This is getting interesting! Please continue if u can!

I hope u update soon!
8/22/2013 c1 6Neko and Niky
Neko: nice one!
Niky: you did a great job!
Neko: we got nothing else special to say so...
Neko and Niky: *holds each oh refs hands* hope you update soon!
8/22/2013 c1 12RandomGirl777
Yay! You posted it up You did a good job Hachi-senpai!
Yuriko wasn't out of character, desu! She's fine!
I hope you up-date-

Yuriko: -Suddenly appears- WAH! -Eyes sparkles-

Moving on ' I hope you up-date soon, desu!

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