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2The Alchemist of Dawn
This is so absolutely amazing! Thank you for writing this. I cant get enough, literally read off of this in 3 days! Cant wait to read more, and i cant stop smiling!
2The Alchemist of DawnThis is so absolutely amazing! Thank you for writing this. I cant get enough, literally read off of this in 3 days! Cant wait to read more, and i cant stop smiling!
3/27 c27 Alastor the Eleanorean
I love this story. Thank you for the amazing chapter lol. Well written. Please keep going in this trend
I love this story. Thank you for the amazing chapter lol. Well written. Please keep going in this trend
2/18 c28 SunPho3n1x
This has been a wonderful story! Harry’s morality kind of goes back-and-forth in the story although I can see the logical progression of where his thinking is coming from. I am interested to see where all of his relationships with other people are going. Thank you for writing this.
This has been a wonderful story! Harry’s morality kind of goes back-and-forth in the story although I can see the logical progression of where his thinking is coming from. I am interested to see where all of his relationships with other people are going. Thank you for writing this.
2/17 c28 BrokenWorldsKing
Read this in a day. Absolutely insane work here. 9/10. Definitely projects a sense of realism about Gaia and stuff.
Read this in a day. Absolutely insane work here. 9/10. Definitely projects a sense of realism about Gaia and stuff.
1/8 c4 OscuraCat
Just finished the 4th chapter and I’m absolutely loving this story so far! Can’t wait to finish reading it!
Just finished the 4th chapter and I’m absolutely loving this story so far! Can’t wait to finish reading it!
12/20/2024 c1 FusionCoreReactor
Disregard these negative comments who have nothing constructive to say. Keep up the good work.
It’s usually the ignorant who speak the loudest, all they do is yap, yap, yap, yap. Not providing anything worthwile in terms of adding to the story. Take what they say with a grain of salt since your fanfic got them worked up enough that they had to write a comment.
Also, take note that despite their apparent dislike, they still kept on reading. If they hated it so much they should have just left. Instead they kept reading.
Anyways I hope this is still in progress or hiatus, either way I’ll still be looking forward to potential updates. I’m hyped to see how you incorporate the 2nd and upcoming 3rd movie into the story.
Disregard these negative comments who have nothing constructive to say. Keep up the good work.
It’s usually the ignorant who speak the loudest, all they do is yap, yap, yap, yap. Not providing anything worthwile in terms of adding to the story. Take what they say with a grain of salt since your fanfic got them worked up enough that they had to write a comment.
Also, take note that despite their apparent dislike, they still kept on reading. If they hated it so much they should have just left. Instead they kept reading.
Anyways I hope this is still in progress or hiatus, either way I’ll still be looking forward to potential updates. I’m hyped to see how you incorporate the 2nd and upcoming 3rd movie into the story.
12/20/2024 c1 FusionCoreReactor
A planetary scale Fidelius Charm would be possible, given how energy rich pandora is. Maybe cast it at a pandora equivalent of a layline?
Loving the world building, I’m getting more info on Pandora from the movies. But not much when it comes to Earths current state. Your interpretation regarding the crisis they’re facing is very Interesting. I also like the fact that Harry is very active when it comes to working with other groups to help rejuvenate Earth. My favourite chapters involved Harry travelling and discussing potential solutions and innovations. I’m looking forward to future updates. If you still plan on continuing this, which I hope you do.
A planetary scale Fidelius Charm would be possible, given how energy rich pandora is. Maybe cast it at a pandora equivalent of a layline?
Loving the world building, I’m getting more info on Pandora from the movies. But not much when it comes to Earths current state. Your interpretation regarding the crisis they’re facing is very Interesting. I also like the fact that Harry is very active when it comes to working with other groups to help rejuvenate Earth. My favourite chapters involved Harry travelling and discussing potential solutions and innovations. I’m looking forward to future updates. If you still plan on continuing this, which I hope you do.
9/7/2024 c2 Bronze
Well, the Unspeakables DID want him to outlast them and protect the magical world. It seems they were too good at their jobs as Harry outlived the entire magical world as well. So, unless there're magicals hiding somewhere he's not only the last but also alone. Not something I'd wish on almost anyone. Now stranding someone like Voldemort on far side of the moon where he'll never see Earth again, yes, him I'd do it to. Maybe even Good Ole Fumblemort as well. It's what he deserves.
Well, the Unspeakables DID want him to outlast them and protect the magical world. It seems they were too good at their jobs as Harry outlived the entire magical world as well. So, unless there're magicals hiding somewhere he's not only the last but also alone. Not something I'd wish on almost anyone. Now stranding someone like Voldemort on far side of the moon where he'll never see Earth again, yes, him I'd do it to. Maybe even Good Ole Fumblemort as well. It's what he deserves.
8/28/2024 c1 Bronze
In some respects, this is no surprise. Good Ole Fumblemort was never a Light sided wizard. He was the True Dark Lord. He never intended for anyone else to have power over all the world, only himself. So, of course he had Harry abused by his so-called family. Then manipulated all through school. And the Unspeakables being dumb little sycophants as well as suck-ups believed everything he told them about Harry. Thus, they followed his orders to " Protect " Harry by locking him away till some future need arose. If that isn't Dark, then I don't know what is!
In some respects, this is no surprise. Good Ole Fumblemort was never a Light sided wizard. He was the True Dark Lord. He never intended for anyone else to have power over all the world, only himself. So, of course he had Harry abused by his so-called family. Then manipulated all through school. And the Unspeakables being dumb little sycophants as well as suck-ups believed everything he told them about Harry. Thus, they followed his orders to " Protect " Harry by locking him away till some future need arose. If that isn't Dark, then I don't know what is!
8/5/2024 c28 datscringebro
You know, for a rape apologist you can actually write a decent story when the rapists are no longer part of it. Made it to this point and can only think how good of a godsend those monsters aren't in the story anymore. Them coming back in the future though will kill the story.
Although seems it's already dead currently. Probably for the best. Wouldn't want a author who thinks getting someone drunk while your sober and having sex with them is consent continuing such a story. That's just sick on multiple levels. The fact you made harry ok with it even worse. It was a massive slap the the face and middle finger to real life sexual abuse/rape victims and you just went "Oh who cares since they're just young and dumb". By your logic if you drug a child or teenager and have sex with them it's ok? Because it's the same thing and if you really think like that you deserve a jail cell to spend your life in to protect others from yourself. So again it's probably for the best this died before you can glorify those monsters anymore then you already did.
Good riddance.
You know, for a rape apologist you can actually write a decent story when the rapists are no longer part of it. Made it to this point and can only think how good of a godsend those monsters aren't in the story anymore. Them coming back in the future though will kill the story.
Although seems it's already dead currently. Probably for the best. Wouldn't want a author who thinks getting someone drunk while your sober and having sex with them is consent continuing such a story. That's just sick on multiple levels. The fact you made harry ok with it even worse. It was a massive slap the the face and middle finger to real life sexual abuse/rape victims and you just went "Oh who cares since they're just young and dumb". By your logic if you drug a child or teenager and have sex with them it's ok? Because it's the same thing and if you really think like that you deserve a jail cell to spend your life in to protect others from yourself. So again it's probably for the best this died before you can glorify those monsters anymore then you already did.
Good riddance.
8/5/2024 c19 Guest
Jesus fuck just in the first part of the chapter you made a rape victim actually reward his rapists. You're a monster if you truly thing thats remotely ok.
Jesus fuck just in the first part of the chapter you made a rape victim actually reward his rapists. You're a monster if you truly thing thats remotely ok.
8/5/2024 c17 Guest
Jesus christ! Are you seriously trying to give his manipulative rapists MORALS? Screw that. They deserve death so I hope mia dies and her boy toy have to live with the results of their actions
Jesus christ! Are you seriously trying to give his manipulative rapists MORALS? Screw that. They deserve death so I hope mia dies and her boy toy have to live with the results of their actions
8/5/2024 c17 datscringebro
It was rape no matter how you spin it. The fact you claim someone alcohal or drug impaired can consent at all should have your local police put you on a watchlist for obvious reasons anyone with a working brain can see.
It was rape no matter how you spin it. The fact you claim someone alcohal or drug impaired can consent at all should have your local police put you on a watchlist for obvious reasons anyone with a working brain can see.
8/5/2024 c14 Guest
This chapter basically ruined the story so guess it's for the best this mess died before it could get worse. Would of been way better without the forced feeling sex scenes to say the least
This chapter basically ruined the story so guess it's for the best this mess died before it could get worse. Would of been way better without the forced feeling sex scenes to say the least
8/4/2024 c15 CMdkelley
You said this as a Gen fic... You know no relationships? Instead, you have Harry willingly go to a party, where he gets drugged and raped by a couple who are trying to take advantage of his kindness and weath. Sure, they have horrible lives and the boy is trying to provide for his sister... But seriously, this was a gen story. Harry wakes up and is like oh I lost my virginity and one of them as a dude... Oh well I cant remember it and whatever but I guess ill role with it... Even if this had just been a girl date raping him, only for Harry to start dating them I would be over the story... That is not how gen stories work...
You said this as a Gen fic... You know no relationships? Instead, you have Harry willingly go to a party, where he gets drugged and raped by a couple who are trying to take advantage of his kindness and weath. Sure, they have horrible lives and the boy is trying to provide for his sister... But seriously, this was a gen story. Harry wakes up and is like oh I lost my virginity and one of them as a dude... Oh well I cant remember it and whatever but I guess ill role with it... Even if this had just been a girl date raping him, only for Harry to start dating them I would be over the story... That is not how gen stories work...