for The Line5/11/2024 c9 Guest
Will you ever be continuing this it seems cool
Will you ever be continuing this it seems cool
6/5/2022 c9 
6dippytrippy122
Man this sucks. This story JUST got to the point that was genuinely awesome - Harry and Ellie’s brother sister relationship, and then it’s over:( I’m sad now. I did enjoy the journey though:)
6dippytrippy122Man this sucks. This story JUST got to the point that was genuinely awesome - Harry and Ellie’s brother sister relationship, and then it’s over:( I’m sad now. I did enjoy the journey though:)
7/6/2021 c2 1arespeverell2021
I read the first chapter and then the second. And Now I have like 20 questions:
Do they know where harry is?
Are they watching him?
Are they not?
Harry kills someone in chapter one and doesn't feel anything then he kills someone in chapter 2 and he's like "OMG I just killed someone I'm such a bad human!" Wtf.
1arespeverell2021I read the first chapter and then the second. And Now I have like 20 questions:
Do they know where harry is?
Are they watching him?
Are they not?
Harry kills someone in chapter one and doesn't feel anything then he kills someone in chapter 2 and he's like "OMG I just killed someone I'm such a bad human!" Wtf.
3/3/2020 c9 NazgulBelserion
I was expecting a story where they react to Harry's adventure like in first chapter but it's meh
I was expecting a story where they react to Harry's adventure like in first chapter but it's meh
11/5/2019 c1 The Dark One Rising
Well, this isn’t the best at grammar or even plot. The Sphere is oddly voyeuristic. It also represents something of a plot hole. If such a thing exists, why is any character ever able to hide? Most of the professors are acting disconcertingly immature. It seems questionable that they would continue to allow children to view such a horrific thing. It is even more questionable that the Sphere would not first be tested elsewhere. Snape, a ear-hardened spy, would not react so visibly. In fairness, the adults are hardly the most reliable figures, even in canon.
I do not mind the pairing of Harry and Hermione. It has likewise been shoehorned into other fics. The distance could also reasonably make the heart grow fonder.
Well, this isn’t the best at grammar or even plot. The Sphere is oddly voyeuristic. It also represents something of a plot hole. If such a thing exists, why is any character ever able to hide? Most of the professors are acting disconcertingly immature. It seems questionable that they would continue to allow children to view such a horrific thing. It is even more questionable that the Sphere would not first be tested elsewhere. Snape, a ear-hardened spy, would not react so visibly. In fairness, the adults are hardly the most reliable figures, even in canon.
I do not mind the pairing of Harry and Hermione. It has likewise been shoehorned into other fics. The distance could also reasonably make the heart grow fonder.
8/14/2017 c9 LoneFox123
Glad to see you're back, though I'm going to have to reread this story, seeing as I've forgotten much of it. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Glad to see you're back, though I'm going to have to reread this story, seeing as I've forgotten much of it. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
8/10/2017 c9 Guest
It seems to be flowing nicely i reckon it would be good if ellie turned bite harry and got cured
It seems to be flowing nicely i reckon it would be good if ellie turned bite harry and got cured