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7/6 c2 1arespeverell2021
I read the first chapter and then the second. And Now I have like 20 questions:
Do they know where harry is?
Are they watching him?
Are they not?
Harry kills someone in chapter one and doesn't feel anything then he kills someone in chapter 2 and he's like "OMG I just killed someone I'm such a bad human!" Wtf.
6/19/2020 c9 narutouzumaki9718
Is this going to be updated?
3/3/2020 c9 NazgulBelserion
I was expecting a story where they react to Harry's adventure like in first chapter but it's meh
11/5/2019 c1 The Dark One Rising
Well, this isn’t the best at grammar or even plot. The Sphere is oddly voyeuristic. It also represents something of a plot hole. If such a thing exists, why is any character ever able to hide? Most of the professors are acting disconcertingly immature. It seems questionable that they would continue to allow children to view such a horrific thing. It is even more questionable that the Sphere would not first be tested elsewhere. Snape, a ear-hardened spy, would not react so visibly. In fairness, the adults are hardly the most reliable figures, even in canon.

I do not mind the pairing of Harry and Hermione. It has likewise been shoehorned into other fics. The distance could also reasonably make the heart grow fonder.
2/5/2018 c2 Numbet1ebaystoregmail
Intense
8/14/2017 c9 LoneFox123
Glad to see you're back, though I'm going to have to reread this story, seeing as I've forgotten much of it. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
8/10/2017 c9 Guest
It seems to be flowing nicely i reckon it would be good if ellie turned bite harry and got cured
8/10/2017 c9 1orion0905
Welcome back, I'm sorry about your loss.

Good chapter there, sadly I can only see this ending in tears at this point. His magic wants nothing to do with Elli so what will the magic of the world do?
11/29/2016 c8 1DanDrake
Are you planning on continuing this?
10/9/2016 c8 Gregorvich
or
1/8/2016 c8 masa1980
Cool story. Keep on writing! Maybe some changes with the orb...
5/27/2015 c8 starboy454
excellent story so far
4/2/2015 c8 Anon
will-you-do-the-reactions
2/2/2015 c8 JB
Well done. This chapter was worth the wait. I'm glad they finally met, I just wish it wasn't in these circumstances. I hope everything will work out for them. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
1/6/2015 c8 17Varigos D. Vastitas
I've never played any part of The Last of Us nor seen a let's play of it on youtube, so I gotta say this seems like a fresh story to me. The moment at the end took me by surprise, and reading this in the dark allowed my dog a nice moment to startle the hell out of me.
This chapter had a perfect level of description: not to wordy yet described everything to the point of immersion. I didn't notice any spelling errors or grammar screw ups. I have to say this is what I would consider a decent example of well written fanfiction.
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