for His Name was Billy Mischief2/26/2015 c35 
1AemeliaBea
My last review got posted before I was done... :/ I'm new to this, so I'm still kind of getting used to how everything works...
ANYWAY, I was gonna say that I can be really picky when it comes to stories in general, but this just... was so great. Like, I have no complaints. The characterization was PERFECT, as I'm sure you've been told numerous times, and I absolutely loved your OCs, especially Gus... I just... I love Gus so much, and I can't even explain why... he's just so innocent, and sweet, and kind, and then at the end MAN. And I liked Billy too until he became Bill and got all evil. I almost cried when he was torturing Gus, it was just so hearbreaking oh my gosh... I mean, I get where he's coming from but Gus wasn't trying to kill him and he was only jealous... I definitely sympathize with Gus...
And Ricky was great too, I loved how you actually developed her character instead of just making her a generic love interest. I wish this was an actual bound in paper book so I could put it on my shelf and read it over and over again.
I also loved how you tied it in with the show and everything, all those little details... it was just great. If you ever decide to continue it (which seems unlikely at this point) or write a sequel, I will be so happy to read it! Thank you for writing this wonderful story, I know I'll be reading it and rereading it for, like ever! There's so much more I can say, but I don't want to write a novel here so I'll just leave it like that! You are an amazing writer!
BB
1AemeliaBeaMy last review got posted before I was done... :/ I'm new to this, so I'm still kind of getting used to how everything works...
ANYWAY, I was gonna say that I can be really picky when it comes to stories in general, but this just... was so great. Like, I have no complaints. The characterization was PERFECT, as I'm sure you've been told numerous times, and I absolutely loved your OCs, especially Gus... I just... I love Gus so much, and I can't even explain why... he's just so innocent, and sweet, and kind, and then at the end MAN. And I liked Billy too until he became Bill and got all evil. I almost cried when he was torturing Gus, it was just so hearbreaking oh my gosh... I mean, I get where he's coming from but Gus wasn't trying to kill him and he was only jealous... I definitely sympathize with Gus...
And Ricky was great too, I loved how you actually developed her character instead of just making her a generic love interest. I wish this was an actual bound in paper book so I could put it on my shelf and read it over and over again.
I also loved how you tied it in with the show and everything, all those little details... it was just great. If you ever decide to continue it (which seems unlikely at this point) or write a sequel, I will be so happy to read it! Thank you for writing this wonderful story, I know I'll be reading it and rereading it for, like ever! There's so much more I can say, but I don't want to write a novel here so I'll just leave it like that! You are an amazing writer!
BB
2/26/2015 c36 AemeliaBea
Okay, I know this was posted like forever ago and you probably won't even read this but I HAD to at least TRY and explain how much I absolutely ADORE this story!
Like... this book needs more attention. It was absolutely and utterly superb! I can be really picky when it comes to
Okay, I know this was posted like forever ago and you probably won't even read this but I HAD to at least TRY and explain how much I absolutely ADORE this story!
Like... this book needs more attention. It was absolutely and utterly superb! I can be really picky when it comes to
11/15/2014 c36 MissSmileDip
You are the best human to ever live.
You are the best human to ever live.
9/30/2014 c36 2ThetaLS
O.O sequel, sequel now
But OH MY ISOSCELES, that story was AMAZING. I loved every part of it, from your portrayal of Billy, to all the OCs, the tie ins to the show... it was all beautiful T.T
...Well, everything 'cept the last chapters, because while they were still flawlessly written like all the rest, those buggers were CREEPY. I think you just gave me nightmares, haha. Maybe when you make a oneshot or sequel or something, you could make a happy ending version of this? I mean, this ending was amazing, but gosh darn it I need something that will allow me to look back at this story with something other than fear! .
2ThetaLSO.O sequel, sequel now
But OH MY ISOSCELES, that story was AMAZING. I loved every part of it, from your portrayal of Billy, to all the OCs, the tie ins to the show... it was all beautiful T.T
...Well, everything 'cept the last chapters, because while they were still flawlessly written like all the rest, those buggers were CREEPY. I think you just gave me nightmares, haha. Maybe when you make a oneshot or sequel or something, you could make a happy ending version of this? I mean, this ending was amazing, but gosh darn it I need something that will allow me to look back at this story with something other than fear! .
9/26/2014 c1 jacelyn
gotta say I absolutely love this! best fanfiction ever! even made me cry in the last chapters (i'm a big baby). anyway, great work! byeeee!
gotta say I absolutely love this! best fanfiction ever! even made me cry in the last chapters (i'm a big baby). anyway, great work! byeeee!
9/17/2014 c4 Latingeek
I know you wrote this before Sock Opera but...
"The only reason I like puppets is because I like the idea of having people under my complete control."
I just love it! Stopped as soon as I read it to tell you so. Perfect characterization for Bill.
I know you wrote this before Sock Opera but...
"The only reason I like puppets is because I like the idea of having people under my complete control."
I just love it! Stopped as soon as I read it to tell you so. Perfect characterization for Bill.
8/21/2014 c36 13Sturm and Drang
This was fantastic!
I loved the story and all the little details and tie-ins you used.
It's clear you put a lot of effort into this.
To sum it up: Bravo!
13Sturm and DrangThis was fantastic!
I loved the story and all the little details and tie-ins you used.
It's clear you put a lot of effort into this.
To sum it up: Bravo!
7/29/2014 c36 2TheUn-AwesomeMe
Hi, I haven't done reviewed a fic in ages, so I'm a little rusty but I had to tell you how much I absolutely loved this. I've only just gotten into reading Gravity Falls stories, but I was not expecting something of this quality, it was a roller coaster from start to finish, so much that at one point I was sitting up all night reading this. I'm normally too impatient to read about original characters, but for the most part I really loved Gus and Ricky, and the Pines brothers and all, and just really loved how everyone was so three dimensional! I also enjoyed the references to previous episodes. So yeah, just wanted to tell you how magnificent your fic was, and thank you for uploading it to share. (Wow this review was pretty formal sorry)
2TheUn-AwesomeMeHi, I haven't done reviewed a fic in ages, so I'm a little rusty but I had to tell you how much I absolutely loved this. I've only just gotten into reading Gravity Falls stories, but I was not expecting something of this quality, it was a roller coaster from start to finish, so much that at one point I was sitting up all night reading this. I'm normally too impatient to read about original characters, but for the most part I really loved Gus and Ricky, and the Pines brothers and all, and just really loved how everyone was so three dimensional! I also enjoyed the references to previous episodes. So yeah, just wanted to tell you how magnificent your fic was, and thank you for uploading it to share. (Wow this review was pretty formal sorry)
7/14/2014 c36 4username-password777
I just have to say, I feel this is the best fanfiction I've ever read on the website. The details and dialogue are flawless and it grabs attention and it leaves me wanting more. I was sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what would happen next. The climax was amazing and the suspense leading up to it was awesome. I truly love this and can't wait to hopefully read more!
4username-password777I just have to say, I feel this is the best fanfiction I've ever read on the website. The details and dialogue are flawless and it grabs attention and it leaves me wanting more. I was sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what would happen next. The climax was amazing and the suspense leading up to it was awesome. I truly love this and can't wait to hopefully read more!
7/1/2014 c36 10010103
Amazing story I'm wowed! Totally flawless and just plain fantastic! I love gravity falls and this story is off the halo! Oops I mean off the charts. And yes I know I'm awesome.
Amazing story I'm wowed! Totally flawless and just plain fantastic! I love gravity falls and this story is off the halo! Oops I mean off the charts. And yes I know I'm awesome.