for His Name was Billy Mischief12/23/2013 c36 Guest
aaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH.
Thank you so so so so so so much for writing this. This was...perfect. And yeah, I saw a few grammatical and spelling errors over the course of this story, but really, nothing too bad. And I've said and seen others say it before, but the way you portray Bill's voice is flawless. And the ending? THAT ENDING. It was just...eek! This entire chapter - nay, this entire story - has just...made my year. And the year of 2014. I will need nothing until Gravity Falls season 2 because this will still have me enthralled. I'm also definitely planning on rereading it at some point, and I want to hear what happened to everyone else. And at first, when you ended it without going into further detail with Gus and Ricky, I was just like, What?! But then I realised that this was Bill's story and I just had to take a second, because of how much it fit.
I am most excited for Gompers's story.
See ya soon.
aaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH.
Thank you so so so so so so much for writing this. This was...perfect. And yeah, I saw a few grammatical and spelling errors over the course of this story, but really, nothing too bad. And I've said and seen others say it before, but the way you portray Bill's voice is flawless. And the ending? THAT ENDING. It was just...eek! This entire chapter - nay, this entire story - has just...made my year. And the year of 2014. I will need nothing until Gravity Falls season 2 because this will still have me enthralled. I'm also definitely planning on rereading it at some point, and I want to hear what happened to everyone else. And at first, when you ended it without going into further detail with Gus and Ricky, I was just like, What?! But then I realised that this was Bill's story and I just had to take a second, because of how much it fit.
I am most excited for Gompers's story.
See ya soon.
12/23/2013 c36 
1Elkvolf
Jusf finished reading your whole story. All I can say is- I can't say anything actually! Your writing is so well done and the plot and characters... It's all so perfect. I loved this story so much and I still bang on about it to everyone I know who will listen (I've commented before by the way, just not with my username I think. Because I was lazy...) and I will CONTINUE to rave about it even now that it's done! I will be looking forward to your sequels with much anticipation and any other literary works you may write in the future. You have earned a loyal reader in me, good author. :) Thank you so much for bringing us on this wickedly well-written adventure. ...Well I guess I did have words after all. XD Ok, but just remember; You're awesome! :D. P.s.: This story is so damn good I wish it were a movie so I could watch it over and over again! 3
1ElkvolfJusf finished reading your whole story. All I can say is- I can't say anything actually! Your writing is so well done and the plot and characters... It's all so perfect. I loved this story so much and I still bang on about it to everyone I know who will listen (I've commented before by the way, just not with my username I think. Because I was lazy...) and I will CONTINUE to rave about it even now that it's done! I will be looking forward to your sequels with much anticipation and any other literary works you may write in the future. You have earned a loyal reader in me, good author. :) Thank you so much for bringing us on this wickedly well-written adventure. ...Well I guess I did have words after all. XD Ok, but just remember; You're awesome! :D. P.s.: This story is so damn good I wish it were a movie so I could watch it over and over again! 3
12/22/2013 c1 Guest
I love bill he just so adorable :)
I love bill he just so adorable :)
12/22/2013 c36 8Mrs. Cipher
Wow. This was, truly, the best fanfiction I have ever read. The sequel thing seems interesting as well. Can't wait to read that!
What I liked most about this was how much sense it made. This one story explained, in your own way, how some of the things of Gravity Falls came to be and it all fit perfectly. From the Muti-bear to the bottomless pit, to the amulet to the nomes, and Gompers, even. And that joke Bill makes in Dreamscapers about Gideon being a "Ventriloquist's dummy"; you even gave that an origin! Geez, everything is just so perfect! I don't think there is a word to describe how much I enjoyed this!
8Mrs. CipherWow. This was, truly, the best fanfiction I have ever read. The sequel thing seems interesting as well. Can't wait to read that!
What I liked most about this was how much sense it made. This one story explained, in your own way, how some of the things of Gravity Falls came to be and it all fit perfectly. From the Muti-bear to the bottomless pit, to the amulet to the nomes, and Gompers, even. And that joke Bill makes in Dreamscapers about Gideon being a "Ventriloquist's dummy"; you even gave that an origin! Geez, everything is just so perfect! I don't think there is a word to describe how much I enjoyed this!
12/13/2013 c33 2MyLittleMuffinZ
Took me about three days to catch up to this fanfic!
holyisocelesthisstoryisamazing... Wait, I have a encoder/decoder...
kroblvrfhohvwklvvwrublvdpdclqj!
I am so tempted to...ah, fine. HAVE FUN RICKY!
2MyLittleMuffinZTook me about three days to catch up to this fanfic!
holyisocelesthisstoryisamazing... Wait, I have a encoder/decoder...
kroblvrfhohvwklvvwrublvdpdclqj!
I am so tempted to...ah, fine. HAVE FUN RICKY!
12/13/2013 c33 Guest
I just realised that this was up.
Schmebulock!
Gompers POV still rocks.
"His maniacal but still very sexy laugh."
Okay, just make your girl immortal, whatevs.
But also D: NO THAT'S SAD. NO.
Next chapter soon! But wait, it's probably getting close to being over. Dammit.
I just realised that this was up.
Schmebulock!
Gompers POV still rocks.
"His maniacal but still very sexy laugh."
Okay, just make your girl immortal, whatevs.
But also D: NO THAT'S SAD. NO.
Next chapter soon! But wait, it's probably getting close to being over. Dammit.
12/12/2013 c11 MyLittleMuffinZ
I can't believe I actually somewhat understood the code without looking.
I can't believe I actually somewhat understood the code without looking.
12/11/2013 c32 Asha
I LOVE your Gompers perspective! LOVE it!
I LOVE your Gompers perspective! LOVE it!
12/5/2013 c32 Guest
gompers pov best pov, without a doubt. and i totally called that bill would make the animals immortal. im really worried about what rickys going to do. cant wait for the next chapter! (:
gompers pov best pov, without a doubt. and i totally called that bill would make the animals immortal. im really worried about what rickys going to do. cant wait for the next chapter! (:
12/5/2013 c32 Guest
I totally forgot about the note. And yay for misunderstandings! This is going to get bad fast...I guess I'm glad he's not mad at Ricky, but I'm afraid she'll find out what happened to Gus somehow or just find out something bad, and try to confront Bill and then it will only get worse. But seriously, how does he expect this to work out? How is Ricky gonna react when she realizes her boyfriend is a TRIANGLE DEMON.
I never want this story to end.
I totally forgot about the note. And yay for misunderstandings! This is going to get bad fast...I guess I'm glad he's not mad at Ricky, but I'm afraid she'll find out what happened to Gus somehow or just find out something bad, and try to confront Bill and then it will only get worse. But seriously, how does he expect this to work out? How is Ricky gonna react when she realizes her boyfriend is a TRIANGLE DEMON.
I never want this story to end.
12/3/2013 c31 Guest
Great chapter overall; my only concern is how hard it is to make out the perspective switches. I know it may have just been FF.N screwing with you, though - so I'm not mad.
Great chapter overall; my only concern is how hard it is to make out the perspective switches. I know it may have just been FF.N screwing with you, though - so I'm not mad.
12/2/2013 c2 8Lord Cookie Crisp of Baahaala
Well, that was something else! Now we know where the title comes from. Keep on keeping on, bro!
8Lord Cookie Crisp of BaahaalaWell, that was something else! Now we know where the title comes from. Keep on keeping on, bro!
12/2/2013 c31 Guest
This story is horrid I hate you.
This story is amazing I love you.
Seriously though, this story, is really really good. I literally squealed when I saw that 31 for the chapters And can I just say, I love how you had the "Beginning of Billy Mischief" chapter, and then the "Death" one, and now his name is Bill. And I love (hate?) how...just...sadistic he was when he dealt with the gnomes. It...explained a lot.
And I like how it's Triangulum, but also Billy- it's Billy, but without the "human-ness." Which is just a bad deal for everyone.
But POOR GUS NO but also HE FREAKIN DESERVES IT. Well, he deserved something, but maybe not his deepest fear, like, ever? But hey, that's what you get for pissing off a demon. But now I'm worried because, nonononono DON'T HURT RICKY. I'm actually pretty apprehensive about that...Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
This story is horrid I hate you.
This story is amazing I love you.
Seriously though, this story, is really really good. I literally squealed when I saw that 31 for the chapters And can I just say, I love how you had the "Beginning of Billy Mischief" chapter, and then the "Death" one, and now his name is Bill. And I love (hate?) how...just...sadistic he was when he dealt with the gnomes. It...explained a lot.
And I like how it's Triangulum, but also Billy- it's Billy, but without the "human-ness." Which is just a bad deal for everyone.
But POOR GUS NO but also HE FREAKIN DESERVES IT. Well, he deserved something, but maybe not his deepest fear, like, ever? But hey, that's what you get for pissing off a demon. But now I'm worried because, nonononono DON'T HURT RICKY. I'm actually pretty apprehensive about that...Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
12/2/2013 c1 Lord Cookie Crisp of Baahaala
I love how you made other references to existing characters in the show. And the amulet! It's the same one Gideon had, isn't it? Wow! Keep writing! I wanna know what's gonna happen next!
I love how you made other references to existing characters in the show. And the amulet! It's the same one Gideon had, isn't it? Wow! Keep writing! I wanna know what's gonna happen next!