for Kept Promises
19/7/2013 c1 heytherelaura
i would absolutely love a story about them, i loved this one shot. So adorable
i would absolutely love a story about them, i loved this one shot. So adorable
8/25/2013 c1 Guest
Your prose is kind of cliched and the whole Isaac and Brooke acting like they're going out at the beginning when they're not doesn't quite fit the plot line. There's also a major lack of characterisation for Brooke and I felt like you should have introduced her and given her some other characteristic other than being totally in love with Isaac. But it's a really great start and I hope you write some more.
Your prose is kind of cliched and the whole Isaac and Brooke acting like they're going out at the beginning when they're not doesn't quite fit the plot line. There's also a major lack of characterisation for Brooke and I felt like you should have introduced her and given her some other characteristic other than being totally in love with Isaac. But it's a really great start and I hope you write some more.
8/25/2013 c1 Tanya Reyes
I'm not logged in, I think, but I would like to see this as a multi-chapter story
I'm not logged in, I think, but I would like to see this as a multi-chapter story