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7/21/2014 c1 22Mrs. 11th
I am very intrigued by this, and I can't wait to see where it goes!
7/21/2014 c1 OptimisticLady

I look forward to reading the rest of it, even though I haven't even read the Percy Jackson books. Shhh. Love me.
9/7/2013 c2 12Princess Unikitty
aah! great chapter. i liked the dialogue.
8/26/2013 c1 Princess Unikitty
interesting story so far.
8/25/2013 c1 3TheOrangeNinjaUnicornSuperhero
Great job! I love it! Keep going!
8/25/2013 c1 WhitePantherLance
So, good language. As always, proper spelling and grammar are a must in stories, and as often as I do find so many fanfictions slipping on these things, I'm glad you managed to use them very well, so much so that I did not detect any mistakes. Well done there.
The plot holds an interesting premise so far, but be careful with how you handle the scene with Sam and the blonde girl. That could easily slip into an alternate universe style or something equally weird, which could destroy the unique feel of the story.
Good job on portraying Grovers thoughts, though. They feel genuinely his, down to the bag of tin cans in his bag.
The rest, though, is still too early to tell seeing as this is only chapter 1. However, you have created a decent, if not exactly original hook, and I look forward to reading more. Cheers!

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