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5/10/2017 c9 6The Lone Omega
Hey man awesome storys so far! They have plenty of detail in them. Just wondering when your next update will be as you haven't updated in a few years. Great story, keep up the hard work
C ya
9/20/2013 c8 71dax0042
Man that was good.
9/7/2013 c7 The dark shadow
I love it
9/7/2013 c7 dax0042
This was AWESOME! I really love the way Sarge killed those four. Can't wait to see what happens.
9/2/2013 c6 dax0042
If it's Mark, I hope he dies for what he did to Sarge.
9/2/2013 c5 dax0042
Wow, I like this, but I'm sad that Garth is dead.
8/26/2013 c1 JgdPanther
Interisting beginning.
I dont know what to think about this story cause I dont know enough.
Write more, and readers and others will be able to write better Reviews
Like I said an intersting beginning and let me guess the Wolf his Humphrey and
his was crushed by somthing in his past and now he is very depressed and aggresiv with
himself and to others. [Like a lone Wolf] Am I right ?
Write more chapters, because now I just can guess what I can think about this storie.

MFG JgdPanther from Germany and sorry for bad english
8/27/2013 c4 24TheChriZ1995
Decided to check this story out and I'm not disappointed, sure the chapters aren't super long but you still got good detail which makes up for that. I hope to see more of this story and see how you develop it, till then best of luck on future chapters.
8/27/2013 c4 71dax0042
Boy, you got Sarge to have a thing for Lilly, but Garth will most likely beat him down.
8/26/2013 c1 dax0042
Nice, but can't say I'm hooked.
8/26/2013 c2 dax0042
Can't wait to see what happens next.

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