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3/21/2024 c27 Bigotes15
Woah that was quite a ride, i read this fic out of curiosity since someone mentioned it on Fate paradox and i enjoyed it, probably one of the best fate crossovers out there, i wish we could have seen more OSG stuff like that mentioned Sarge, Grif and Simmons vs Karna but still very enjoyable, see yah in the next fic
Woah that was quite a ride, i read this fic out of curiosity since someone mentioned it on Fate paradox and i enjoyed it, probably one of the best fate crossovers out there, i wish we could have seen more OSG stuff like that mentioned Sarge, Grif and Simmons vs Karna but still very enjoyable, see yah in the next fic
1/26/2023 c11 Guest
Should have given Uryuu Slan from Berserk as caster she would have really gotten along with him greatly and it would be horrifying yet fascinating
Should have given Uryuu Slan from Berserk as caster she would have really gotten along with him greatly and it would be horrifying yet fascinating
9/26/2022 c3 TKstein
Hi!
I know it is coming faaar in the future from when you have written this, but I would like to have this on the record, if you ever have the chance to read it.
While it is true that Gura Gura no Mi is a defining feature of the strength that Whitebeard represented, his Legend is most represented by his (in)famous love for family and his "sons".
Thus, the Whitebeard pirates and allies should definitely be his second NP, similar to Ionia Hetaroi for Iskander.
Hi!
I know it is coming faaar in the future from when you have written this, but I would like to have this on the record, if you ever have the chance to read it.
While it is true that Gura Gura no Mi is a defining feature of the strength that Whitebeard represented, his Legend is most represented by his (in)famous love for family and his "sons".
Thus, the Whitebeard pirates and allies should definitely be his second NP, similar to Ionia Hetaroi for Iskander.
9/1/2022 c2
2MoonKnight030
So Natsu Dragneel is Caster? I only know the basic of Fairy Tail.
And ALUCARD is Avenger?! You evil, evil man! I love it.

So Natsu Dragneel is Caster? I only know the basic of Fairy Tail.
And ALUCARD is Avenger?! You evil, evil man! I love it.
9/1/2022 c1 MoonKnight030
So Obito Uchiha a.k.a Tobi is Assassin, Whitebeard is Lancer and well... no idea about bersersker.
So Obito Uchiha a.k.a Tobi is Assassin, Whitebeard is Lancer and well... no idea about bersersker.
6/23/2021 c27 Sage of Wind Dragons
this was fun. your power balancing out the world dynamics was sorta sqrewy on alot of things, but hey fun fights.
good ride, good fun.
this was fun. your power balancing out the world dynamics was sorta sqrewy on alot of things, but hey fun fights.
good ride, good fun.
6/19/2021 c21 Sage of Wind Dragons
ehh, your massivly over stating how fast Natsu was? like Obito was fast enough with Kamui to be dueling and sparring with Teleportation MINATO so... that was bullshit.
but whatever, removing Kamui from play with only these three gives all the other servants an actual chance in a fight I guess. alas.
ehh, your massivly over stating how fast Natsu was? like Obito was fast enough with Kamui to be dueling and sparring with Teleportation MINATO so... that was bullshit.
but whatever, removing Kamui from play with only these three gives all the other servants an actual chance in a fight I guess. alas.
6/19/2021 c16 Sage of Wind Dragons
good fun, although the whole six paths of pain bijju mode, he should be able to summon the tialed beasts himself? and hell he had a contract with Kurama once so that is probabbly apart of his legends...
of course... that is to op for this setting so realistically his master doesnt have enough energy to fuel such things though.
still epic fight! was wondering if you were going to go with babe saber for it considering the holy and other stuff, her getting shock by Alexander was fun, as well as epicness...\course not doing a holy attacker like Beserker or Saber makes more sense with Allucards wishes, so a manly man in Edward makes alot of sense, although I think Alexander as a fellow king and empire building make alot of sense...
course epic armies attacking each other!
course Vamp has from centuries upon centuries so surprise nazi fighters is fun stuff to. stilll good fun!
but yes blowing up buildings... and aww sheltered idiots about to be deady dead...
good fun, although the whole six paths of pain bijju mode, he should be able to summon the tialed beasts himself? and hell he had a contract with Kurama once so that is probabbly apart of his legends...
of course... that is to op for this setting so realistically his master doesnt have enough energy to fuel such things though.
still epic fight! was wondering if you were going to go with babe saber for it considering the holy and other stuff, her getting shock by Alexander was fun, as well as epicness...\course not doing a holy attacker like Beserker or Saber makes more sense with Allucards wishes, so a manly man in Edward makes alot of sense, although I think Alexander as a fellow king and empire building make alot of sense...
course epic armies attacking each other!
course Vamp has from centuries upon centuries so surprise nazi fighters is fun stuff to. stilll good fun!
but yes blowing up buildings... and aww sheltered idiots about to be deady dead...
6/10/2021 c6 Grimm Magician
Not gonna lie, I'm glad you didn't give him Schrödinger's power... It literally would have been no contest as to who would win the war...
Not gonna lie, I'm glad you didn't give him Schrödinger's power... It literally would have been no contest as to who would win the war...
6/9/2021 c12 Sage of Wind Dragons
So! In terms of talked talk, you managed surprisingly well to handlefolks that have dreams and aspirations.
I dontt quite like the rock falls and everyone dies ending for Natsu? But it works for him being in this fic, and hell Lucy had some time travel nonsense already to change things.
In terms of ranking on wishes… also talking points
Assassin!- best goal of stop me from being a villain for 90% of my life. Also Save the world From Super Demon Bunny trying to kill EVERYONE.
Caster- cause stop the dragon king tyrant. Possible time travel shenanagins already involved in the legend so who knows.
Lancer- save your boys and friends from tragedy.
Saber- her fundamental bit of avoid tragedy is good, but it should be more embrace the orgy harem I am supposed to have with Lancelot/Gunivere/Mordred, and raise my Daughter/Niece better as my actual Daughter heir thing. If she helps her Master realize he needs his harem life while he goes out and does good, it should help her out!
Beserker- saving their Masters life is good, but might be solved by one of the other Masters going out of their way to help him /raise Zoukan and all that. If all they can resolve is making sure Sakuya gets taken care of then that is fine.
Avenger- a Great and Worthy enemy to defeat he who has fallen so far is good fun, but might be solved more through the Fighting then the Wish itself, the Wish would be its own disappointment that none could defeat him bitter regret thing. Still his reasons for FIGHTING are perfectly Valid.
Rider- Reincarnation/Live life to its fullest is fun stuff.
Archer-he is here for the lols, all the fun come at me bro.
Still all of them doing good TALKS is great. Personality! Also good drinks.
also red vs blue is YES for the cringe memes of hilarity.
So! In terms of talked talk, you managed surprisingly well to handlefolks that have dreams and aspirations.
I dontt quite like the rock falls and everyone dies ending for Natsu? But it works for him being in this fic, and hell Lucy had some time travel nonsense already to change things.
In terms of ranking on wishes… also talking points
Assassin!- best goal of stop me from being a villain for 90% of my life. Also Save the world From Super Demon Bunny trying to kill EVERYONE.
Caster- cause stop the dragon king tyrant. Possible time travel shenanagins already involved in the legend so who knows.
Lancer- save your boys and friends from tragedy.
Saber- her fundamental bit of avoid tragedy is good, but it should be more embrace the orgy harem I am supposed to have with Lancelot/Gunivere/Mordred, and raise my Daughter/Niece better as my actual Daughter heir thing. If she helps her Master realize he needs his harem life while he goes out and does good, it should help her out!
Beserker- saving their Masters life is good, but might be solved by one of the other Masters going out of their way to help him /raise Zoukan and all that. If all they can resolve is making sure Sakuya gets taken care of then that is fine.
Avenger- a Great and Worthy enemy to defeat he who has fallen so far is good fun, but might be solved more through the Fighting then the Wish itself, the Wish would be its own disappointment that none could defeat him bitter regret thing. Still his reasons for FIGHTING are perfectly Valid.
Rider- Reincarnation/Live life to its fullest is fun stuff.
Archer-he is here for the lols, all the fun come at me bro.
Still all of them doing good TALKS is great. Personality! Also good drinks.
also red vs blue is YES for the cringe memes of hilarity.
6/7/2021 c11 Sage of Wind Dragons
well the lesson she faild at in her life was treat your orgy family well and let everything go right.
honestly holding back on Lancelot, Gunivere, and Morgana ALONG with her daughter in mordred doomed them all!
embrace the poly!
but hey! next time around shes going to be apart of team Babe Saber, the Baber! Also all of everyone is going to want some of that.
well the lesson she faild at in her life was treat your orgy family well and let everything go right.
honestly holding back on Lancelot, Gunivere, and Morgana ALONG with her daughter in mordred doomed them all!
embrace the poly!
but hey! next time around shes going to be apart of team Babe Saber, the Baber! Also all of everyone is going to want some of that.
6/7/2021 c6 Sage of Wind Dragons
considering his dreams and set up and wishes of the heart, Allucard is someone who is very well suited for Fate in regards to summoning and epic heroness.
Maka and Natsu dont really? half cause their stories ended with a happy ever after continue on thing so dont have any wishes, and also did not die so...
still! Saber and Avengers have very appropriate stuff going on with them. more people hot for the Saber, (and someone who did cross gendering sorta as well!)
and his finally find someone who can kill me thing paired with someone who is sitll HUMAn and not a monster...
she and maka are very appropriate Monster fighter Holy things.
hell Makas whole soul really works wonders.
still! another Epic King having Epic King moments with each other!
hell Obito has killed and manipulated multiple Kings by himself and lead from the shadows by his own will, in his own way he is King adjacent which is fun. the Will to match the world type thing.
still!
Emiya needs to get his shit priorities in order with his wife and paramour, they need to raise Illia and Shirou eventually!
and hell with their ties with Beserker now and his find someone who can free Sakura she can get raised in the fam to!
let them be HAPPY dang it! also relaxed free form multiple pairings thing cause this is Fate where everyone is thirsty for everyone else.
happy endings dang it! somehow!
also defeating evil worm tentacle rape monster is of the good.
also should have made Excalibur , Excalibur, it be fucking hilarious how Saber is the only one to put up with him and tie in the universes together! Sabers world can be the pre set up for Makas deranged world, just as Naruto could be set up as a before history existed type thing and the gods did their thing, probabbly a pre Gilgemesh messy everything get nuked thing, history being a lost to the ages type thing.
it all ties in together!
considering his dreams and set up and wishes of the heart, Allucard is someone who is very well suited for Fate in regards to summoning and epic heroness.
Maka and Natsu dont really? half cause their stories ended with a happy ever after continue on thing so dont have any wishes, and also did not die so...
still! Saber and Avengers have very appropriate stuff going on with them. more people hot for the Saber, (and someone who did cross gendering sorta as well!)
and his finally find someone who can kill me thing paired with someone who is sitll HUMAn and not a monster...
she and maka are very appropriate Monster fighter Holy things.
hell Makas whole soul really works wonders.
still! another Epic King having Epic King moments with each other!
hell Obito has killed and manipulated multiple Kings by himself and lead from the shadows by his own will, in his own way he is King adjacent which is fun. the Will to match the world type thing.
still!
Emiya needs to get his shit priorities in order with his wife and paramour, they need to raise Illia and Shirou eventually!
and hell with their ties with Beserker now and his find someone who can free Sakura she can get raised in the fam to!
let them be HAPPY dang it! also relaxed free form multiple pairings thing cause this is Fate where everyone is thirsty for everyone else.
happy endings dang it! somehow!
also defeating evil worm tentacle rape monster is of the good.
also should have made Excalibur , Excalibur, it be fucking hilarious how Saber is the only one to put up with him and tie in the universes together! Sabers world can be the pre set up for Makas deranged world, just as Naruto could be set up as a before history existed type thing and the gods did their thing, probabbly a pre Gilgemesh messy everything get nuked thing, history being a lost to the ages type thing.
it all ties in together!